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Subtle, tingling, blissful caress Wholeness of being, free from stress Essence of presence celebrates Each node within, Cupid’s address Magnetic heat, pheromones grates To music of spheres, soul gyrates Bliss elixir suffuses form Soma nectar drips through love’s straits Mists divine are both cool and warm Magical is, this benign storm The false drops away, truth is known Rapture unbound, is the new norm Bliss and wisdom, that’s ours to own Borne of love and light, is home grown Within our heart, is God’s heaven Yet each must enter there alone 05-September-2022

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Date: 9/20/2022 9:35:00 AM
Seeker, congratulations on your win with this stellar poem of images and light! Your word pictures are so inventive, fresh and so inspiring. So happy to see this on the winners list where it can stand out and receive the attention it deserves. Your words carried me away to a heavenly place of inspiration. Thank you! :)' Blessings!
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Date: 9/20/2022 6:27:00 PM
Thank you, Sam and for the fav too!
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Date: 9/20/2022 9:36:00 AM
Just faved it!
Date: 9/10/2022 7:29:00 AM
Way to go with this faith-based winner. Congratulations. Thanks for sharing this winner. Sara
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Date: 9/10/2022 8:22:00 AM
Happy you enjoyed, Sara, thank you!
Date: 9/10/2022 6:48:00 AM
Seeker, wonderful Rubaiyt poem, I love it, and congratulations on your win in Brian's contest _peace and tranquility ~
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Date: 9/10/2022 8:21:00 AM
Thank you, Constance!
Date: 9/9/2022 9:31:00 PM
Great concept of heaven. Simple, yet, no so easy to achieve. "each must enter there alone" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/10/2022 3:46:00 AM
Thank you, Chris!
Date: 9/9/2022 4:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest. I love your last stanza, “Bliss and wisdom etc. :)Paulette
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Date: 9/9/2022 5:55:00 PM
Thank you, Paulette!
Date: 9/4/2022 11:40:00 PM
Love this Poetry from you on Heaven my friend. Blessings to you for it...
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Date: 9/5/2022 7:22:00 AM
Thank you, Michael, so delighted you enjoyed

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