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Heated Chandelier

Chandelier drips through glossy frames Its layer of tint sets a room ablaze; And then, while glances are exchanged Soft the passion heating warmth’s pace. Two shadows lock in blind desire, when Chandelier drips through glossy frames Mouths consume a thirst unrestrained As drops of steam reflect on panes. The evening raw defies hours’ refrain Surrendering to lust that throbs, as Chandelier drips through glossy frames Until one hue blends flesh and glass. Sips of wine taste an afterglow While ceiling lamp quivers to tame Love’s whispered moans now ebbing, lo; Chandelier drips through glossy frames. Jajosh Ongado for nette onclaud's Metaphor: Crystal 9 March 2014

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Date: 3/21/2014 10:10:00 AM
My hearty congratulations on your sparkling write and great win dear friend Jajosh. TYSM as well for sharing! love and hugs, Leonora
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Date: 3/19/2014 4:31:00 PM
Jajosh :) Congratulations, with your winning poem in "Nette O's CRYSTAL: metaphoric, contest." LUV~LINDA
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Date: 3/18/2014 11:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest of Crystal, jajosh
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Date: 3/18/2014 9:53:00 PM
A lovely winning poem,Jajosh, ....SKAT
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Date: 3/18/2014 2:07:00 PM
unique take on the theme, jajosh.. now i see a chandelier as glossed passion.. warm congrats on your great win in my challenge!.. huggs
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Date: 3/18/2014 1:11:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great win in contest : CRYSTAL - A beautiful poem, Jajosh ! (Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/18/2014 12:40:00 PM
Congratulations on the win Jajosh! Verlena
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