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Heartstrings- For Hearth and Home

Heartstrings- For Hearth and Home Pardon me, did you just heave… “Aye, that’s right, you can leave” Good you give me the heave-ho… “Don’t say, just leave this ship- You’re ban from the trip” But wait, I demand to know Why heart throbs callous fate… Or naught’ say in this state? Then, I get’ be on the row. Retrench, though break, I grieve …Still air, elsewhere receive- D-day most furious must bow. Fly wings, see no then clip- A tip, handsome; don’t trip. Ready, steady and will wow. Cos yours’ to concentrate, Theirs to see and relate. Patience in all makes you grow. _______________________________ Balassi Stanza: Two Rhyme Scheme: bbaccadda Syllable count: 667667667

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Date: 12/18/2013 9:47:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 12/19/2013 10:04:00 AM
Thanks Sara.
Date: 12/15/2013 3:54:00 PM
Congratulations Abdullahafeez, well done on your placement here Joe..)
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 12/19/2013 10:04:00 AM
Thanks Joe.
Date: 12/15/2013 8:32:00 AM
Congratulations Abdulhafeez
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 12/19/2013 10:03:00 AM
Thanks Mandy.
Date: 12/15/2013 8:27:00 AM
A clever and entertaining piece. I very much enjoyed. Congratulations AO!
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 1/5/2014 1:53:00 AM
You're welcome. Compliments of the season Sir Richard.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/19/2013 10:12:00 AM
Merry Christmas to you A O. Thanks for your many kind visits and comments.
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 12/19/2013 10:00:00 AM
Thanks Rich Crown.
Date: 12/15/2013 6:02:00 AM
congrats on a fine win AO
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 12/19/2013 9:57:00 AM
Thanks Joseph.
Date: 12/14/2013 7:50:00 PM
Thanks for your interesting poem and congratulations on the win, Abdul
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 1/5/2014 1:54:00 AM
And Thanks for my placement. Will like to know your expectation on your recent contest.
Date: 12/6/2013 9:28:00 PM
Thanks for the entry, Abdulhafeez
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 12/10/2013 9:01:00 AM
You're welcome, Ram.

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