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Heart's Slumber

I'm a sinister shell, lost in bygone deepwaters of gravity-less cerulean tears, that saturate molten sundrops, falling from zinc-plated skies, as heliophilic snow, melts frosted memories in white-washed waves, and the moon- kissed paint of chamomile dusk seeps in cataclysmic bruises of cloudburst refrains. Perhaps, phosphenes perfumed with blueth poppies, splashing neon drops upon midnight shores of crystallized coastal lashes, left pearlescent ice-drop stains of fervent lies and cupid's lampshade. I was never a flamboyant fleur flower, for my rufescent roots were induced with evil effervescence of elusive lambent love. Dormant heavens of cursed fairies, are now bleeding mahonia mist of cocooned truths and deserted dreams in periwinkle poetic estuaries, where doomed driftwoods float as ash grey carnival-canoes. In werifesteria of alchemist's expensive jewels, amidst soiled seagrass, this heart slumbers in silicon rain, that drips from lime-scented starfish-shaped leaves, when pain escalates to tangled treetops, blooming ~ scarlet sun-shells, infused with my smoldering sinister soul.

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Date: 9/2/2023 10:31:00 AM
Hiya, well penned. Nice winner, congrats.
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Date: 9/2/2023 7:53:00 AM
wow you took me away with this beautiful poem, so full of words that enrich the soul. I couldn't pick jut one, loved it, Congrats dear poet. Stay inspired, xo
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Date: 9/2/2023 1:50:00 AM
Hiya, back to your beautiful poem with Congratulations on your well deserved first place win.
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Date: 9/1/2023 5:05:00 PM
Hiya, Congratulations on winning my contest with your beautifully written poem. Your poem is filled with deep thoughts and vivid descriptions, which brings the imagery to life.
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 9/2/2023 7:27:00 AM
Oh my, this really is a magical win for me and it came as such a beautiful surprise, I didn't imagine to be placed as a first place winner, especially when there were many wonderful entries.. This means a lot to me, to be placed in the contest of such a brilliant poet like you, whose works I deeply honour and admire, thank you wholeheartedly~ Hiya :)
Date: 9/1/2023 2:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a write. Your pen was working over time. Have a great day with your wonderful win............
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Date: 8/24/2023 3:46:00 AM
Very descriptive lines penned in this one. Some extraordinary vocabulary also used. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 8/23/2023 11:28:00 AM
Greetings Hiya! Your word use and imagery are indeed stunning, original and so fresh! "Smoldering, sinister soul," "silicon rain," "splashing neon drops on midnight shores." Each line overflows with magnificent images blending into a memorable, unified whole! You have the soul of a poet and I know will bring great depth and beauty to PS. Welcome! So nice to meet you! Blessings to you.
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Date: 8/22/2023 3:45:00 PM
Hiya, Sharma. Well, I've read them all and they are indeed exotic blooms and sparkling jewels. I am commenting on this one - as I delight in the darkness it commences the waltz with, to embrace the reader, to tango their inevitable way to an everlasting smouldering sinister soul. Love it. I'd be interested to read a collaboration between yourself and "Silent One", you have similar styles, yet unique enough to be different.
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Date: 8/22/2023 3:43:00 AM
Welcome to poetry soup. I do love this one, so awfully amazing with its depth and powerful wording. Enjoyed. God bless you always, love, Gina
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Date: 8/21/2023 5:27:00 AM
My friend your fantastic poem is indeed a truly dazzling jewel. So many wondrously deep and beautiful verses. The ending too is a poet's true delight. All in all a masterful new creation. I got to fav this beauty. God bless you.
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Date: 8/20/2023 10:24:00 AM
gorgeous phrasing and alliteration; a beautiful write but with a slightly sinister undercurrent..thanks for commenting on my work, and welcome to the site! :)
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 8/21/2023 2:21:00 AM
Awwn, thank you so much for your beautiful compliment dear, yes I've used 'sinister soul' as an undercurrent to describe ache, angst and melancholy.. I'm truly grateful for your heartwarming comment and it's truly a blessing to be here, amongst you all!
Date: 8/20/2023 6:48:00 AM
I remember this mermaid poem my angelic star, one of my faves from you, you write with such eloquence through out using so many poetic techniques. I absolutely love the metaphors, imagery artistic alliterations and seamless flow of your descriptive wordplay! So stunning and captivating. Such an aquatic write and the ending truly blew me away, from scarlet seashells to white washed waves and lime scented star shaped leaves and silicone rain! How profound! The island ish vibe this emanates is so refreshing and deep
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Date: 8/20/2023 6:23:00 AM
My God! You are a great poet! I want to read more from you.
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Date: 8/20/2023 6:12:00 AM
Lovely imagery, Hiya! that drips from lime-scented starfish-shaped leaves! God bless you! Fave
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Date: 8/20/2023 6:00:00 AM
I'm guessing you have a beautiful soul, but you poetically describe the sinister soul amidst beauty and angst. Silicon rain has a sinister sound to it
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 8/21/2023 2:19:00 AM
Awwn, you definitely realised the depth of this poem, yes I've described 'sinister soul' to show the angst and ache.. Kind of a sarcasm and contradiction. Thank you so much for reading and being so supportive, I truly appreciate it!!!
Date: 8/20/2023 5:45:00 AM
With an astonishing depth, this work exhibits an assortment of remarkable metaphors and captivating linguistic selections. Its sheer magnificence is awe-inspiring. Despite my usual inclination towards structured verse, I am entranced by the grandeur of this creation. Without a doubt, you have set an extraordinarily high benchmark, bound to captivate and deeply affect a vast audience. Wish you a good endeavor on Poetry Soup
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Date: 8/20/2023 5:24:00 AM
Wow! You obviously are not new to poetry. This is breathtaking. I am not a fan of free verse, but I could read poetry as splendid as this any day. You have set the standard with a very high bar. I am sure your poetry will be very popular. I think I will read it again, it certainly is pleasurable. Best Wishes.
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 9/2/2023 7:33:00 AM
Awh, you just made my day much more beautiful by such kind and lovely compliments, I'm so glad that you enjoyed reading this piece... I truly appreciate your precious support, beyond grateful- Hiya :)
Date: 8/20/2023 5:19:00 AM
Quite profound. Some stunning images and catchy usages ! Your maiden appearance and your very first poem I happened to read have left a deep impression on me. All the Best dear poetess !
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 9/2/2023 7:29:00 AM
Thank you so much dear beautiful poetess, I'm beyond thrilled that you enjoyed reading my poetry for the very first time and you felt its emotions.. I'm so grateful to you for your precious kindness~ Hiya - sending love :)

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