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Heartfelt

You broke my heart so I cried You said you wouldn't do it but you lied My heart is heavy my tears leave a stain You don't really love me and now there is nothing but pain You promised me forever But that turned into never I feel so lost and all alone Would it have killed you to pick up the phone? What am I supposed to do now? Try to get over you somehow? You took my heart and I need it back I was so stupid to believe your crap Everyone is right when they say You don't deserve me anyway I gave you all I had and more You were so quick to shut that door My love for you was so true Why wasn't yours too? Crushed and broken now Why did you do it? How, how, how?

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Moon Flower

Date: 4/10/2016 7:36:00 AM

What a nice start up through this beautiful piece. Welcome to Poetry Soup, Jane. xoxo

Jane Williams
Date: 4/10/2016 3:26:00 PM

Thank you

Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/7/2016 12:27:00 PM

Nice entry to poetry soup. Hearty welcome to PS. Wish u a successful journey ahead.......hugs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/7/2016 9:06:00 AM

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