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Heartbroken

The sun was shining on the day she packed her bags and went away; he tried to look a little sad, but by his grin I think he's glad... written 4th September for Milton's 4-line light verse contest

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Date: 9/27/2021 6:14:00 AM
Love it!
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Date: 9/24/2021 1:48:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, and the chuckle it creates. God bless you.
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Date: 9/23/2021 3:26:00 PM
LOVE this, Jack. I realized this morning that I have not heard from you in a while. I hope you are ok. I honestly try to answer all my emails right as soon as I can. I hope i did not miss one of yours!@!
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Date: 9/23/2021 11:10:00 AM
Witty, ironic and very iconic Jack! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 9/23/2021 9:46:00 AM
Beautiful! Writing! Congratulations!
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Date: 9/23/2021 7:41:00 AM
I certainly hope this wins - I can understand how much her friendship meant to you dear Jack, Carolyn is your guardian angel. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 9/6/2021 7:21:00 AM
This certainly has the "Jack Horne" trademark stamped on it, my friend. I can imagine you writing it with a grin on your face :) Regards // paul
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Date: 9/4/2021 5:43:00 PM
Good luck in the contest. very good poem!!
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Date: 9/4/2021 12:07:00 PM
Cute one. Enjoyed reading it today. I got a slight smile. Thanks for all the visits to my page. Sara
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Date: 9/4/2021 10:49:00 AM
Hello Jack Horne, yes it did not effect him to see her leave. enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 9/4/2021 10:08:00 AM
Love it! ~ Belle
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Date: 9/4/2021 9:11:00 AM
Lol, Nicely done
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