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Heartbroken

As I remember my quondam days, I contemplate, I ruminate, The musings of the bygone time, Cleaves my heart apart, With a sharp twinge. I was tenderfoot, budding, blossoming. A bit naive, obtuse, Savored euphoria in everything. Being born under a lucky star, In the cornucopia of, Love, happiness, and blissfulness, Was incomprehensible of the, Forthcoming quagmire. It came all of a sudden. Like a bolt from the blue. Snatched everything from me, Ripped apart all the bonds, Left me wreaked, shattered, dismay, lonely. Those memories haunts me, Like terrible phantasm. Fancy to be over the moon, Yearn to be as happy as a clam, But how could I? My Seventh Heaven, Got burried under jinx. Date of submission: 19/03/2021

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Date: 9/9/2021 11:40:00 AM
Very sad ending and great imagery, Shonima. Congratulations on your win in Constance's contest.
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Date: 11/22/2021 9:30:00 AM
Thank you Eva. Hugs, Shonima.
Date: 9/8/2021 9:49:00 PM
Shonima, congratulations on your win in my "H" Contest, New or Old with your poem ~ friendship and harmony _Constance
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Date: 11/22/2021 9:31:00 AM
Thank you Constance. Hugs, Shonima.
Date: 5/6/2021 3:55:00 PM
Shonima, congrats on your win in Brian's contest with your descriptive write! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 11/22/2021 9:32:00 AM
Thank you Kim.....Hugs, Shonima

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