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Heartbreak

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Please note... I am not sad - just met a friend who has lost her lovely dog:-(

 

Jan xx

Can you take a pill for a heart that is aching Or put a plaster on a heart that is breaking If anyone has a solution, a remedy or cure Will you let me know, I could do with it for sure Jan Allison 24th August 2014

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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 8/25/2014 12:50:00 PM
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unconditional love. that is what our pets offer. actually they are our friends. a well written piece.
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/25/2014 12:56:00 PM
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Thanks Maurice - the poem also relates to our own personal heartbreak too:-( Hugs jan xxx
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Monterey Sirak
Date: 8/25/2014 5:29:00 AM
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Lovely. Animals become our babies and it is hard to let them go.
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/25/2014 7:26:00 AM
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I agree Monterey but the words also apply to us as humans:-) Hugs jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 8/24/2014 3:31:00 PM
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This is overwhelming with emotion, Jan, as a person who loves animals of all kinds and has 2 sick cats, dying, I think your poem is perfect.
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/24/2014 5:44:00 PM
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Oh I am so sorry to hear that it must be so difficult for you - wish there was something that could be done to mend a breaking heart :-( Hugs jan xxx
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Casarah Nance
Date: 8/24/2014 3:04:00 PM
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This is so smooth Jan, what a gracefully play with your words, sorry I don't have a pill for a heart but I got a hug for the soul ;) xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/24/2014 5:43:00 PM
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All i could do was give her a hug:-( Hugs jan xxx
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/24/2014 2:55:00 PM
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Oh dear...I have no cure, but if you do find one, please pass it along to me! ;) Hugs BTW....WORDED SO WELL! ;)
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/24/2014 5:41:00 PM
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Guess the write applies to any form of heart break:-( Hugs jan xxx
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/24/2014 12:33:00 PM
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No cure...you can only mask the pain....hugs Tim
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/24/2014 5:40:00 PM
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I could only give her a hug:-( Hugs jan xx

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