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Below is the poem entitled Heartbreak which was written by poet OPEMIPO AKINSOYINU. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.



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Cold murder
Fierce cold
That waged war with a fire ball
The thunder claps
The rain smiles
Walking down down memory lane
To those beautiful avenue
Young and beautiful was I,
Free to be me.
Those humble memories I hold with nostalgia
I cherish them more than life
Not long ago,I celebrated my victory
My world nose-dived
I was indeed happy,so glad I made it through
But!...My joy starts to crash
In my very eyes
I must survive,but how would I?
Troubles and confusion the path I only know
Listen,I'm a survivour
I told myself and forged ahead
Burying all hindrances behind,let's go.
Time and time again
I look with tears in my eyes
At the recent happenings
And is as if God is gone
Everything seems black
But,can I still hold on?
My heart is broken
Down and completely out
Well I hoe, hope would arrive soon
And this horrendous nightmare would be over
Only to find out I've been dreaming.

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  1. Date: 7/19/2010 6:41:00 AM
    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Opemipo. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/17/2010 4:47:00 PM
    This is soo Naija good wor Opemipo

  1. Date: 7/17/2010 4:10:00 PM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your most creative write tonight.. with luv..

  1. Date: 7/17/2010 4:01:00 PM
    well said and done enjoyed your poem,,deep and all the ending made it a brilliant wake up call..p.d.