Heartbeat

one strong heartbeat that pumps and carries oxygen gives life; when it stops *Its a controversial subject. However when one heart stops another can live through organ donation. 04-25-21 Contest:Paradox of Life Poetry Sponsor: JCB Brul

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Len Gasun

Date: 5/2/2021 7:33:00 AM

Brilliant thought dear Alexis. Congratulations!

Howard Kerr

Date: 5/2/2021 3:09:00 AM

Alexis, Well done. A creative entry. Howard

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/30/2021 10:22:00 PM

nice message, Alexis ~

Juliet Ligon

Date: 4/30/2021 6:24:00 PM

Amazing how we are sustained daily until we're not. Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/30/2021 4:20:00 PM

yes, that amazing heart just one day stops. Good one, Alexis. Congrats to you.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/30/2021 12:23:00 PM

strange that you shared this today my friend's husband is getting a kidney from someone today, thank you for sharing, glad I stopped by, have a great day congrats xo

Anisha Dutta

Date: 4/30/2021 10:33:00 AM

Precise approach. Congrats to win. Blessing

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/30/2021 10:12:00 AM

Well done Alexis my dear friend - I enjoyed how you put this controversial subject into a striking Monoku - very clever. Hugs and blessings from across the pond, going down to the sea for two weeks -with my laptop of course - hope i get inspired. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 4/30/2021 9:38:00 AM

Beautiful thought Alexis.. Congrats on you win.. Have a blessed day.. Hugs.. ~ Ani

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/30/2021 8:25:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Like the added note. All so very true. I enjoyed it. Have a blessed day......................

Marilene Evans

Date: 4/30/2021 8:17:00 AM

Congrats! You left the readers hanging or finish it up with their own imagination.... clever....

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 4/30/2021 8:02:00 AM

Great message here! Congrats on your win, Alexis and thanks for visiting my page :)

Funom Makama

Date: 4/27/2021 6:19:00 PM

Beautiful, as a medical doctor, this tickled my fancy. I call my wife my heartbeat (anyway)..

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/26/2021 8:57:00 AM

Yeah...

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/26/2021 6:36:00 AM

Great Thought Dear Alexis and a smart move towards the contest, with my very best wishes, hugs and regards //Lasaad

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/26/2021 1:55:00 AM

Its amazing that when your time is up you can help someone live. Every one should be an organ doner. Tom

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/26/2021 1:53:00 AM

A very intelligent monoku.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/25/2021 4:56:00 PM

No one would want my heart because I have a hole in the wall between the atria and there is also a tumor in there which causes arrhythmia. I was on the organ donor list until I found out about the problems I have and I told them not to put me back on it(if I were to die in an automobile accident). Your work is a timely subject that can save another's life and give them a chance to live. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/25/2021 4:41:00 PM

Haha! Great ending, Ale

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/25/2021 3:57:00 PM

Best gift one can give even in death--so well said, Alexis.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/25/2021 2:43:00 PM

thought provoking piece Alexis, I know how organ donation can save so many lives:-) hugs Jan xx