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Heartache

My heart has been broken, shattered like glass My soul misguided, led from its path Each new lesson becomes harder to learn Love is a flame of fire, stand too close, and you’ll get burned The doors that free me, emotionally, they remain closed You can find me in the garden of the wilted rose. Each petal is a memory slowly fading to black The pain inside constantly reminds me where she’s at Just a single thought wages a war in my mind Heartache has been among us since the dawn of time ©2/18/11

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/21/2011 8:41:00 AM
such a sad piece..filled with such haunting emotion and memories..love,Deb
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Date: 2/20/2011 5:07:00 AM
Very filled with emotion and sadness.. Good constructed piece my friend...
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Date: 2/20/2011 3:19:00 AM
So sad and so true. A perfect piece Jimmy.
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Date: 2/20/2011 1:04:00 AM
It has been there since the dawn of time, and will remain until the dusk. Decent descriptiveness here.
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Date: 2/19/2011 11:16:00 PM
This is sad and haunting, JAM.....still it's beautiful writing. Definitely one for my Fav. List. Love always, Annalise
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