Heart Truth

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*Image of Two Hearts Drawn On Sand by Heart Images. Heart Truth Harmony resonates...fulfills an abandoned chamber, albeit, interims vigilantly monitored...by one's self, seconds fleet onward...persuading one's lips to rise gladly. Gleeful eyes revisit....a hosts of crossing memories, each and all contain a measure...throbbing gently a ballad plays, once exist a youthful sight...now aged look back--my heartbeats. Harp strings rhythms...my veinuous tracks embrace--an organ plays, while one which entertains...constantly convinces a melody, twain pounds likewise as one...compared since the day eyes first met. Soundless bounces consonance...silent eyes whisper a tune, donning facial expressions...grants a lifetime in brevity's blinks, solemn occasions a welcoming...touched and set claimed me. Juxtaposed well times...atone for the substance that writhes me, on days that my heart quivered for a beat...hands gripped my chest tightly, beckoned Heaven's gate to wait a while...angels awoke me. Blessed be normal cadences...epilogues long await, an open invitation hails...a broader spectrum stimulates, an anew life has been rewarded...a heartbeats so true. 2020 August 08 *1st Place* Heart Truth ~~Chantelle Anne Cooke: Judged 2020 August 09

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 8/12/2020 2:39:00 AM

Another example of your brilliant blend of spectacular imagery and breathtaking emotions William. Congratulations on your win :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/12/2020 2:47:00 AM

Another song from your heart, Aditi, like the Sun, nothing stays hid, Aloha! William

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/10/2020 5:43:00 AM

- Congratulations on your beautiful winning poem, William :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/10/2020 5:51:00 AM

I thank you for your kind comment, Anne-Lise, Aloha! William

Anisha Dutta

Date: 8/9/2020 9:27:00 PM

Simply EXCELLENT to listen to melody of your Truth of Heart Blessing. Big Congrats to win First Place

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/9/2020 9:43:00 PM

Thank you so much, Anisha, your comments and accolade is much welcomed my friend, Aloha! William

Sigrid Ermine

Date: 8/9/2020 1:37:00 AM

William, what a beautiful construction! I love the way you wove audio and memories, feels like a receptive heart. 'Soundless bounces consonance...' sentence is gorgeous. A super lovely winner in your hands.!

Sigrid Ermine
Date: 8/9/2020 2:18:00 PM

My pleasure. Top Congratulations! A stunning compilation.

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/9/2020 2:40:00 AM

I welcome your extended courtesies, Sigrid, from your insightful reads, to your applicable articulative commentaries, thanks for the encouragement, Aloha! William