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Heart To Heart

Liberated spirit, keep up the fight acquiesce not to the world foray, where darkness is deemed to be light. It would be easy to lose your newly found sight, and follow people’s popular precipitous way. Liberated spirit, keep up the fight. Steel yourself against the wolf’s sharp bite, Clothed in sheep’s fair wool today, Where darkness is deemed to be light. Ask for help from the heavenly Might, And bend your ear to Wisdom’s say, Liberated spirit, keep up the fight. Mistake not immorality for right, keep verbal engineering far at bay, where darkness is deemed to be light. Be not depressed in this world’s plight, Let Him lift you from where you lay. Liberated spirit …keep up the fight, where darkness.. is deemed to be light. (Inspired by and written for Catie Lindsey's Villanelle contest) 6/1/11

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Date: 6/27/2011 7:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Catie's "Villanelle Me" contest Robert. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/26/2011 8:54:00 PM
Lovelye poetry, Robert! Well done with the Villanelle, a form I have not ventured in so far. But more important is the content of this piece of writing. Inspiring! Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 6/25/2011 9:35:00 AM
I feel the beauty and desire to expand in this write. I can see I will appreciate reading your work and I will as soon as I get the chance (i'm so busy). Every stanza here speaks to me opening a dimension of light on my soul. In my writings, please know I have no desire to be right. I want to learn to stop reacting to stimulus which seems to be the worst predicament of man. My works are designed to remind myself of exactly what you are saying in Heart to Heart. I'll read more later. David
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Date: 6/24/2011 2:11:00 PM
a villanella to god! wow, great use of form. Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 6/24/2011 9:15:00 AM
It's like a glowing bright flame of faith,,how true the soft ones too need know to protect themselves from the wolves of this dark world.Congratulations to you Robert on your excellent win in this fantastic form...gautami
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Date: 6/24/2011 6:26:00 AM
An amazing inspirational write Bob. Many congrats for this win.
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Date: 6/23/2011 7:42:00 PM
An inspiring message that sounds even better as told in the villanelle's lovely echoing form. This is beautiful. Congratulations.
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Date: 6/23/2011 2:47:00 PM
Many congrats on your win, Robert : )
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Date: 6/23/2011 1:15:00 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of catie, Robert
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Date: 6/23/2011 9:39:00 AM
Congrats Robert on your wonderful winning poem in the contest luv.. an excellent creative journey in poetry ..enjoy...
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Date: 6/23/2011 9:35:00 AM
I do give my worries to God, Rob, and most of the time I am lifted from the darkness to the light. Beautifuly, spiritual message here. Congratulations on your win in Catie's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/23/2011 8:21:00 AM
Inspiring and makes one want to cling to hope and carry on!! Wonderful poem, Robert!! Congratulations on your win!!
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Date: 6/12/2011 8:04:00 AM
Very wise thoughts expressed beautifully in your villanelle, Robert. We do have to beware of wolves in sheeps clothing and use our best judgment to remain in the light. Many people do get depressed as they look at the world around us, but God is always there to provide guidance. Excellent entry for Catie's contest, my friend, and I wish you success. (As far as learning from the past, "zip" was a good way to describe it.) Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/2/2011 11:50:00 AM
A very timely write, dear Robert. Time to turn many things (values especially) around - where darkness turns to light. LOve, daver
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Date: 6/2/2011 11:02:00 AM
Nice Villanelle, Robert. Good luck in Catie's contest. ^__^
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Date: 6/2/2011 10:46:00 AM
a very creative and well written piece of art. good luck in contest. thank you for commenting on Moon Glowing.
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Date: 6/2/2011 10:20:00 AM
Is there a new moon or what? Love the new found inspiration of poets I have been reading today. Glad to see your poetry among them Robert. May the sun always shine down upon you and continue to bring inspiration to your soul. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/2/2011 5:36:00 AM
Very impressive poem Robert . Good luck in the contest Anne.
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Date: 6/1/2011 6:38:00 PM
speaks! well Robert,,, the best of luck in the contest,,,p.d.
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Date: 6/1/2011 6:08:00 PM
So much inspiration, and hope instilled in each line! It makes one want to shout with joy!
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