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Heart Throbs

His brushing a stray tress from her cheek brought a twinkle to her weakened eyes… The light of youth and steadfast love returned when he cupped her face such grace… Dusting off his shoulders caused a tilting of his head lamplight glanced off his bald pate. Chuckling, they walk in sync “I can dress you up,” each says to the other “But, I can’t take you out anywhere!” Laughing, like the teen heart throbs each still sees in the others eyes they board the plane for Cairo…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/13/2010 6:32:00 AM
A soft touching Free verse Deborah, melows me just right(write) ! much love, james
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Date: 12/8/2010 11:52:00 AM
How wonderful it is when an elderly couple still shares this kind of love. Admire their sense of humor, too. On your blog you said there were a lot of elderly couples staying at that palace too! Now that's the way to complete a bucket list in style! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/8/2010 12:13:00 AM
Completely plausible girl. Made me jealous except for the bald pate. Just kidding. Super piece. Charles
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Date: 12/7/2010 12:22:00 PM
Intensely dramatic piece Debbie.. young luv ..forever new.. amazing lines so interesting and incredible TEACH.. enjoyed with luv..
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Date: 12/7/2010 9:44:00 AM
i like this sentimental poem very much indeed it is exactly the sort of thing i like t o write too....welcome back fro m Egypt...glad the sharks didn't get you ...Syd
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Date: 12/7/2010 7:39:00 AM
this is a great metaphor; the whole beautiful thing, deborah.. very uniquely done with great sub-texts!! warmest, nette
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Date: 12/7/2010 6:21:00 AM
Lovely warm write..enjoyed....luv Michael
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