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Heart Stopper

My heart stopped as you took my breath away You are the brightest part of every day Years do not matter you are still sublime The best part off life is that you are mine I possess you but not in a bad way It is our dance a game that we both play I live in a dream with you in my arms I will never be immune to your charms I feel the beat of your glorious heart I continue to explore every part You are the one who wipes away my tears You kept your promise to always be here I soak you up within my whole being So satisfied with what I am feeling So now when I laugh it shows in my eyes The essence of me has been realized The heart that you stopped is beating strong I am so thankful that you came along

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/30/2015 7:31:00 PM
I'm glad to read this. :) You are blessed, Richard...Lovely...I'm waiting for a new piece. Now that the celebrations are over...Hope you have time to pen one. Hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/31/2015 9:23:00 AM
Hugs back to you.
Date: 12/30/2014 4:20:00 PM
Another heart poem....What lovely dedication this is, Richard. Hugs
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/31/2014 8:24:00 AM
Yes, we are heading out to my brother's place and we will actually have a family sleep over. ;) It gets kind of crazy in Lebanon around midnight.....people shooting and even antiaircraft is shot into the air. Wild. Safer to stay over.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/31/2014 8:15:00 AM
Thanks and hugs back Eileen. Happy Newyears! Any exciting plans?
Date: 3/31/2013 1:43:00 PM
She must be one special lady! Lovely write.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/1/2013 7:41:00 AM
She certainly is.
Date: 3/31/2013 8:45:00 AM
"I soak you up within my whole being"... great line, Rick! Great over the top romantic poem, Rick! Have a great Easter weekend! Jake
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/31/2013 11:46:00 AM
Thanks Jack
Date: 3/31/2013 8:28:00 AM
Wow, really a heart felt poem Rick a sweet reading for my evening :) hug, yanny
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/31/2013 11:46:00 AM
Thanks Yanny

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