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Heart Ripped Out

Joy filled my days when I heard from you. Now you say nothing against you but I can't text you. My heart broke like waves on shore. Tears flow from eyes with these words spoke. Lions ripped soul into as I remember you the words of love I shared with you. Now all alone for holiday which should have been joy but now filled with my cry of pain deep inside

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Date: 12/19/2013 5:33:00 AM
- A sad and touching poem Michael! - (Hope it's "just a poem"!!!) - I wish you and your family a peaceful and happy Christmas. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/19/2013 6:19:00 AM
Anne this really happened at the worst time but I am getting over it so it can be a good holiday. I have such good friends as you and others on here and closer to me that turn sadness to joy. Your soup friend Michael
Date: 12/18/2013 8:51:00 AM
Oh Michael, a heart wrenching write. I am so sorry. And I have no words of advice except that time ( sometimes a VERY long time) will help. bg
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Date: 12/18/2013 11:29:00 AM
Thanks for the comments it helped some venting the pain. I also have a good friend checking on me and yes time will heal the heart
Date: 12/18/2013 8:37:00 AM
Very poignant write on feelings of loneliness, Michael
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Date: 12/18/2013 11:30:00 AM
Thanks this happened all yesterday. Thanks for comment

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