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heart on a silver plater

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heart on a silver plater

Empire of the mind
drawing down
into this deep ocean
Handing you keys
to all that 
I am center of existence
a sealed script
in one body

Pulsating electric energy
sparking music
muscles play sweetly
into a cardaic cycle
Embracing in
 four chambers
signals love

Red burning hot cells
passion pumps
pressure building
flowing blood emotions
Circulating feelings
takes one's 
breath away

Sweetly honey coated
protected within skinned walls
embracing you darling
from harm sweetheart
Anchored deeply 
in the bay 
of life

Crowned princess
holding the seat
of loves emotions
In this castle 
a drunken vessel
skipping heartbeats
flutters with love 

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  1. Date: 1/21/2014 3:22:00 PM
    You really put your feelings into this poem . Thanks for sharing and long live love... Lucilla

  1. Date: 1/19/2014 2:29:00 PM
    Very passionate write Liam. I enjoyed it very much. Take care.

  1. Date: 1/19/2014 4:45:00 AM
    You have such sweet love flowing out of you. A beautiful poem. Hugs <3

  1. Date: 1/19/2014 4:41:00 AM
    pulsaing thoughts beating like a song, partner.. enjoyed!.. huggs

  1. Date: 1/18/2014 5:43:00 PM
    At least the skipping beats are caused from love..Enjoyed reading your passionate work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

  1. Date: 1/18/2014 1:49:00 PM
    Hi Liam, Awesome romantic write as usual my friend.. Ken

  1. Date: 1/18/2014 1:00:00 PM
    thoroughly enjoyed this piece. well crafted and delivered. heart on fire if you ask me. Well penned .regards Andy Lyle

  1. Date: 1/18/2014 11:42:00 AM
    Crowned princess...Sweet Liam...Sweet...beautiful and enchanting....full of passion and love and hope. You changed the title? Hmmmmm...This is nice too. Thanks for sharing beauty...........