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Heart of the Sea

Your quiet whispers come with the breeze are you missing her? Your sorrow spans the seas The waves lapping at your soul trying to pull yours close to hers but your body won't let you go why did you lose her? The Ocean's Curse... Her heart belongs to the sea her spirit lost to its depths heavy reality brings you to your knee the calm waters mocking her death

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/10/2013 1:17:00 PM

<3 Congratulations!!! Madaline --It was nice viewing your Featured Poem on the soups Home page :) this past week. Take Care and enjoy the NEW coming week.... *Luv~ > LINDA <

John Posey

Date: 11/2/2013 7:21:00 PM

You have captured the pure essence of grief.... This deserved a win... Well done... Jake

Madaline Cannon
Date: 11/3/2013 9:59:00 AM

Thank you!

Skat A

Date: 10/20/2013 9:30:00 PM

Madaline, congratulations, in the heart of the sea contest.............. SKAT

Madaline Cannon
Date: 11/3/2013 9:59:00 AM

Thank you so much!

Lisa Mccall

Date: 10/17/2013 4:05:00 PM

Congrats on ur win. Very beautiful poem

Madaline Cannon
Date: 11/3/2013 10:00:00 AM

Thank you, I enjoyed reading yours, also!

Vandana Sharma

Date: 10/17/2013 12:35:00 PM

Such a heart wrenching poem. many congratulations.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/17/2013 11:20:00 AM

Madaline, beautiful... congratulations...LINDA

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/17/2013 5:06:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your creative winning work..Congrats on your win..Sara

Poet Tacito

Date: 10/14/2013 10:20:00 AM

Poignant, sad, powerful...damn. Flashbacks of a drowning, perhaps? Very twisted & intense. Excellent job!

Madaline Cannon
Date: 11/3/2013 10:01:00 AM

Thank you, Drake!

Jake Ponce

Date: 10/13/2013 8:50:00 PM

This is a good read. I felt like an elder is telling me a tale from long ago in a forest by the sea and I'm sitting near a campfire, owls can be heard in the distance. The elder's voice cracks along with the flame and, in my mind, the images of what you've written slowly plays. Welcome to poetry soup!!!

Madaline Cannon
Date: 11/3/2013 10:03:00 AM

LOL, now every time I reread this poem, I will imagine the setting as you described!

Skat A

Date: 10/13/2013 7:54:00 PM

Madeline. Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Jan Cannon

Date: 10/13/2013 1:21:00 PM

Deep-yet touching !

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/13/2013 12:40:00 PM

Welcome to P-Soup, Madeline ! - Very nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)

Robin Davis

Date: 10/13/2013 12:27:00 PM

This is a deep and emotional poem Full of feeling and heart The imagery pulls the reader in and takes them on a journey of your mind and soul Nice job

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/13/2013 11:03:00 AM

love the imagery, Madeline, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@