Get Your Premium Membership

Heart of the Sea

Crashing of the waves Slamming against each other, As the moon lights up the darkness In the distance. Your thoughts are carried away Into the Heart of the Sea. Secrets to be held Only to be found if searched for. Lying across the ocean floor Like treasures and sadness bound together.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/6/2014 6:21:00 PM
This is one good poem. Thanks for sharing and welcome to Poetry Soup... LUcilla
Login to Reply
Date: 11/6/2013 7:54:00 AM
Great first poem for the soup. Welcome to the soup Lisa.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/3/2013 5:40:00 AM
Sounds like my internal battles on my single days lol Good one.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/3/2013 1:20:00 AM
Nice words...nice comparision :)
Login to Reply
Date: 10/27/2013 10:17:00 AM
Hi Lisa, ... Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. It was nice seeing it on the Poetry Soup-- HOME PAGE. Always a poetry soup friend <3 = LINDA
Login to Reply
Date: 10/27/2013 1:27:00 AM
Lisa, CONGRATULATIONS ;) on having your poem featured................... LOVE SKAT
Login to Reply
Date: 10/25/2013 1:29:00 AM
Hard to picture but I get the metaphor.
Login to Reply
Date: 10/21/2013 3:30:00 PM
Lisa, Welcome to Soup. I'm also very new, and truly love your entry. Great Job. I can't wait to read more. CTB
Login to Reply
Date: 10/19/2013 11:21:00 PM
I really love this one. Didn't it win? gosh, that is one harsh judge.
Login to Reply
Mccall Avatar
Lisa Mccall
Date: 10/20/2013 10:01:00 AM
Ty, there was alot a good ones maybe next time.
Date: 10/13/2013 12:42:00 PM
Wonderful use of imagery! So deep!
Login to Reply
Date: 10/12/2013 10:26:00 AM
a very deep poem Lisa, I love it!!! .. Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
Login to Reply
Date: 10/11/2013 9:39:00 AM
This is flat out beautiful. You captured the very, very fragile balance of love & pain. Wonderfully done! It's nice to meet you! =)
Login to Reply
Mccall Avatar
Lisa Mccall
Date: 10/11/2013 11:52:00 PM
Ty :)
Date: 10/11/2013 3:46:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Lisa ! - Nice to read your first poem here.- Luck in contest! - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Date: 10/11/2013 3:34:00 AM
this is nice, , Lisa,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Login to Reply
Mccall Avatar
Lisa Mccall
Date: 10/11/2013 11:52:00 PM
Ty
Date: 10/11/2013 1:10:00 AM
A nice poem with good imagery
Login to Reply
Mccall Avatar
Lisa Mccall
Date: 10/11/2013 11:53:00 PM
Ty
Date: 10/11/2013 12:31:00 AM
awesome
Login to Reply
Date: 10/11/2013 12:21:00 AM
loved this one, beautiful!
Login to Reply
Mccall Avatar
Lisa Mccall
Date: 10/11/2013 11:52:00 PM
Ty

Book: Shattered Sighs