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Heart of Paradise

Beneath these rocks beats an ancient heart. In this mountain the most important part. It pumps the life giving nutrients to the air. The rhythm of the ages where earthquakes start. The blue of the sky is so very rare. Makes one think that there is life without a care. Enjoying a moment neath the trees so green. Makes me want to spend eternity there. Life has always been so peaceful and serene. Most of the time there is like a dream. Listening to the bees in the flowers hum. Paradise perfected and on that I'll lean. *Rubaiyat Form for John Freeman's contest

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Date: 5/14/2011 8:16:00 AM
Beautiful piece of poetry.Makes me feel like i am in heaven already.Thanks for sharing heaven with us. Gidds
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Date: 5/5/2011 12:25:00 PM
A lyrical write.
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Date: 4/29/2011 2:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 4/27/2011 9:13:00 AM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest, Jimmy
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Date: 4/27/2011 8:47:00 AM
Many Congrats Jimmy on your super win with this wonderful piece on nature's beauty.Best wishes, gautami
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Date: 4/27/2011 8:14:00 AM
Great to see you at the top with this lovely top three poem Jimmy. Congratulations on your special entry's third place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/27/2011 3:33:00 AM
Such beauty in this heart of paradise Jimmy. Many congrats.
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Date: 4/26/2011 6:29:00 PM
Congrad's on your winning write. Light & Love
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Date: 4/26/2011 3:39:00 PM
Very nice, Jimmy! Congratulations on your success in John's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/26/2011 1:00:00 PM
Very nice Jimmy and congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/26/2011 12:13:00 PM
Congratulations Jimmy on your win in the John Moses Freeman's contest "Rubaiyat". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/26/2011 11:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your third place win Jimmy (((( applause )))) well done.....:) smiles
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Date: 4/26/2011 10:53:00 AM
Terrific, Jimmy.. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN, Lainie
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Date: 4/26/2011 10:48:00 AM
Congratulations on 3rd place win with this beauty. I enjoyed reading this wonderful write. Caryl
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Date: 4/20/2011 3:48:00 PM
Great job done with this fine entry for John's Contest, JAM. Wonderful imagery makes me feel like hopping a plane right now! Best of luck in the contest. Love ya! Annalise
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Date: 4/15/2011 8:48:00 AM
Amazing write Jimmy. Wishing you the best in John's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/14/2011 6:29:00 PM
Very descriptive and such a peaceful feel to it..really enjoyed it Jimmy..love,Deb
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