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Heart of Mine

Oh gracious heart of mine, How perilous art thee, On thoughts of obligation u dine, Oh gracious heart of mine, You never say 'no' or whine, Nor doth from worries you flee, Oh gracious heart of mine, How perilous art thee.
12/11/20 Graciousness Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Mohan Chutani

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Date: 11/17/2020 11:12:00 AM
Carmael, love the way you shaped the triolet form, and place your deep emotions to it. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/12/2020 8:48:00 AM
I think many will relate.. You did the form very well..
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Date: 11/13/2020 1:16:00 AM
Thank you.. Love sophia

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