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Heart of Ice

A fire burned deep within his soul for her, but she was aloof and cold as ice As his desire blazed out of control Her frosty emotions became her purposed role the flames of warmth could not make her nice A fire burned deep within his soul No spark of love could make her whole the embers of passion were a roll of the dice As his desire blazed out of control The fire blazed from his head to his soles her icy demeanor was her only vice A fire burned deep within his soul Her frosty heart like an avalanche rolled a frigid smile would have to suffice As his desire blazed out of control But her heart of ice he could not cajole With tears and despair she paid the price A fire burned deep within his soul As his desire blazed out of control Joseph May For Fire and Ice contest

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Date: 12/19/2012 4:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your super win my dear friend Joseph May! love/hugs, LG
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Date: 12/19/2012 2:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your top spot Joseph, I feel honoured to share it with you xx
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Date: 12/19/2012 2:32:00 AM
Congratulations my friend Joseph on your grand win. Wishing you a blessed Christmas. Hugs/Love Maria
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Date: 12/18/2012 8:39:00 PM
Joseph , 2 perceived opposite meanings when it comes to "FIRE And ICE" :-) Congratulations with your winning poem In , Carol's contest... goodnight~ PD
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Date: 12/18/2012 7:17:00 PM
Congrats. Joseph......Seren
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Date: 12/18/2012 4:36:00 PM
I do remember this one. Congrats in the contest. You did very well!
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Date: 12/18/2012 1:46:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest and congratulations on your placement Joseph. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/18/2012 4:20:00 PM
Thank you so much Carol...glad I was able to place in your contest
Date: 12/8/2012 11:33:00 AM
You have written a great piece here my friend... Michael
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Date: 12/6/2012 9:32:00 PM
Wow, this is like a review of the book "Great Expectations". Great write!
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Date: 12/6/2012 4:20:00 PM
awesome poem, Joseph, should do well in the contest...
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Date: 12/6/2012 9:55:00 AM
I love the stor39tey in this poem..glad i stopped by
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Date: 12/5/2012 2:39:00 PM
hey, you had the opposite scenario. My woman was the fire and the man was of ice!! It's sure nice to see you trying new forms like the Terzanelle, Joseph. Good luck in this contest.
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Date: 12/5/2012 8:21:00 AM
Like this one Joseph. Is it for the Fire and Ice contest, if so I think it will do well xx
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