Heart Inside a Heart

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5/12/2024 for A - TYPES OF FORMS Poetry Contest sponsored by Constance La France

"I carry your heart with me (I carry it in my heart) I am never without it..." E.E. Cummings My heart's ultrasound check - your heart, would find inside. Eternal love for you - my ticker will abide. Things one cannot resist - gravity, the moon's pull, Alone, I say goodbye - my solo heart feels full.

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Sotto Poet

Date: 5/12/2024 5:47:00 PM

David, your work is incredibly well-crafted on multiple levels. The vivid descriptions, outstanding poem, and fabulous entry into the contest are truly impressive. I wish you the best of luck in the contest!

David Crandall
Date: 5/12/2024 5:53:00 PM

Thanks Sotto, really appreciate your praise on this one!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/12/2024 4:18:00 PM

outstanding poem and fabulous entry into the contest. Best wishes in placing in the "A Type of Poem" contest!

David Crandall
Date: 5/12/2024 5:51:00 PM

Thanks Sara, I hope I got the accents on the right sylLABles (lol)