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Heart In Denial

‘ ‘’’’’’’’’ ‘ ‘ In the middle of honeyed cuddling He whispered a girl’s name while swooning Through excuses he denied A final “goodbye” I chimed While stars set course for true love waiting © ' ''' ' Entry for Sidney~ Leann’s Valentine Limerick/ PD's Poem Posted this Week WeeK Written by nette onclaud

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/2/2012 7:37:00 AM

It is always a pleasure to read your poetry Nette. I want to thank you today for your kind words on my writing. Your words are appreciated more then you know. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 2/1/2012 5:45:00 PM

Nice one Nette, best of wishes to you in your endeavors, hope your allegry is doing better. Agape, Moses

Kash Poet

Date: 1/28/2012 1:04:00 AM

Very nice way to do that Heartbreak Limerick.Enjoyed the read.

Tim B

Date: 1/27/2012 8:47:00 PM

Poor shmuck :) Witty and well crafted limerick 'Miss' Nette, good luck in the contest!

Brenda Victoria Northeast

Date: 1/27/2012 3:30:00 PM

Oh and yes- Congratulations on your win, blessings, Bren: )

Brenda Victoria Northeast

Date: 1/27/2012 3:28:00 PM

Well done Nette, very witty and clever, Love, Bren may true love win, Bren : )

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/27/2012 9:13:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your outstanding poetry this morning Nette. This week has flown by for me. I hope you enjoy your weekend and find the inspiration to write some more during this time. Love, Carol

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 1/27/2012 5:13:00 AM

This makes me smile..and wait for the story of true love, luv, jag

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/27/2012 5:04:00 AM

That would be a deal breaker for sure..Thanks for stopping by..Enjoyed reading your work this morn..Sara

Don Johnson

Date: 1/27/2012 2:36:00 AM

oh dear the wrong name was chimed, the bell had belted him sublime, ok....

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/26/2012 11:05:00 PM

That was one slip he regretted making! Good way to describe everything in this limerick.

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/26/2012 9:30:00 PM

Oops, a big mistake there! I honestly do have to say I've never done that before! It's a terrible fate to have that come true! Horrendous things that may happen because of that! You did excellent with this poem Nette! I'm sure Sidney-Leann will love it as I do! Awesome Work!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/26/2012 8:49:00 PM

HI, Nette. I see you finally did YOUR limerick too. haha. It was one of those contests I put off forever, and I am glad to see you got a goodie into it before it closed. Good luck in the contest. Andrea

Debra Squyres

Date: 1/26/2012 7:46:00 PM

Big Mistake ....big..big..big Mistake !!! Love the limerick !!