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"heart Break"

When I smiled at you, I worshiped you, You responded with the same, Because you knew… Silently, I loved you softly, But! I didn’t seize you once, Love bounced reversely, Tears shouted, entreating you. Heart appealed to bear its beats, Expected to reach thy spirit, Guessed! Couldn’t draw to thy eyes, Got you once, you left me once. Trapped in spider-webs around, Tried to drip out each emotion, I felt for you. Why was it too late? Swear! I urged to god: Was It right to act? Brain and heart worked oppositely, Unable to conclude it all The one I admired was a fake. Guts crushed into millions, I consoled myself: Someday, your essence will come. I don’t wait for thy sign now, To dig up thy sensations everyday Get away from my mirror. Let the doors of heart be closed!!! I cried today. Not because I missed you, But I realized: I am going to be alright without you… A sweet heartbreaking poem: Dedicated to whom who lost their world in love… But don’t ever be disheartened because world is too vast. By: Shrishty Shrivastava “X” std

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/20/2010 7:45:00 PM
Really an outstanding poem... Excellent creativity and use of archaic words. Your use of imagery to describe emotions is really fantastic! So optimistic at the end too... my fav among ur collection! :)
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Date: 12/17/2010 12:31:00 AM
This poem is meaningful yet simplistic and easy to understand. just loved these lines - I cried today. Not because I missed you, But I realized: I am going to be alright without you… osm !!! U rock !!
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Date: 11/6/2010 6:26:00 AM
thanks to all the visitors....
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Date: 10/30/2010 11:47:00 AM
Thank you for posting your fasinating poetry here at PoetrySoup so we all may read it Shrishty. May your weekend be one of good health and may you find joy in living and find buckets of inspiration along the way. Wishing you the best in any contest you have entered or are going to enter this weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/30/2010 7:48:00 AM
Nice yearnings of love penned well and very surprising twist at the end, going to be alright without you, Shrishty
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