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Heart Break

love and wonderful sky one tear from my eye hope smashed by pain legs heavy from the strain alone i wait to cry

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/18/2009 3:00:00 PM
cry if you need to cry my friend and if you cant cry peel an onion so you bottle up;-),im joking,if you are in times of cry i wish you smiles and these heartfelt verses are well penned-charma
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Date: 4/17/2009 9:05:00 PM
a sad and moving heartfelt piece, breaking up with the ones we love is very hard to do!
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Date: 4/17/2009 8:33:00 AM
aww beautiful.. I love it
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Date: 4/17/2009 8:32:00 AM
this one starts out with hugs and kisses and the punches you in the gut. very emotional piece. good write
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