Heart

Is this considered a poem since I didn’t rhyme, I don't know what form. I sit at my computer staring at the screen Looking back at me is this beautiful slender blonde with blue eyes It’s the woman I was married to for so many years For all our years her hands were up and between them she held my heart Her hands are now empty and down at her side Now that my heart is back inside it feels pain

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Charles Henderson

Date: 7/7/2010 7:16:00 PM

Michael, soup mail waiting.....Charles Hey, just got through looking at all your poems again. They sure look different with all those comments. And some of the best of the soup supporting you. Way to go!

Diiamond Rich

Date: 7/4/2010 3:46:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your poetry today.. I'm new to the soup so I hope you have an open mind as far as poetry. Enjoy ya day.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/3/2010 7:59:00 AM

Michael, sorry about the mistake of you living in Arizona...I read into your work something that wasn't there..This expresses emotion and is descriptive so it has poetic qualities..Try looking to your left and at the bottom there is a box that says Resources..Look at forms there maybe Free Verse or narrative or blank verse ,etc..Sara ..Soup Mail in a few minutes..;Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..