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"Heart" Deep fissures formed in the cracks of the nowhere place where time leeched bleeding claret through the green veined blues protean bit by bit the flesh disappears prematurely 6ft under mulch for rebirth the subcontinent conscientious conscience inward reaching the divine central tableau revels in its simple existing the complexity suspended baulks at the easy third person present floating in time ephemeral watching the essence of the exterior; a haunting numb life dies disappearing between the cracks of all the bland stitched-up walls forget-me-nots lie in their beds smug little darlings all murdered transactional yet unnegotiated unconditional, contracted ad infinitum verbatim far beyond the zone superficial the exotic intoxicating unpicked transforms fluidity, the anima pets the purring animus, caged creatures what was broken grows flowing in the elixir substance of the living thing inside bursting black balloons poetry like rosary beads slightly touched, fed to the monsters now fuelled wild and obedient by the silky pomegranate seeds they are elated in the Lawrence forest hugging trees they, magnetic to angels and demons now walking naked with Puck wetted eyelids reach for the honey dripping off leaves to dew her orbs upon the green each a delicious bitter sweet story swallowed like an ecstasy dream unconquered the id remains captivated circling errors inside The Caim - surrounded by bludgeoned bad memories drowned in sacrificial chalices crumbling cities war conquered dark love dramatique le revolver poétique devient de mieux en mieux justice blooms undomesticated irreverence fertilised by indifference to other bolshevists' chapters mingling mime each other existing tight framed laced up in their well-rounded whole boxes conferring their pegged disapproval, the petulant lamenting loons chase the wood peckers, lyrebirds and sparrows, then, stray to the safety of edges, guarding their rites open mouthed forsooth shocked, shooting arrows or suffocating the Arden smoke rings, like terror-forming earth bound paper tigers their soft vitriols relevant to cementing the outside jungle they prey reeling the kneeling hunters in lotus feet bound, they remain, small and kept like another’s property they are reviewed and red bleeding each a sentence barred between margins wooden framed willow-the-wisps addictive furloughs digress mute and grand mall deadly sin-binned dopamine smiling dandelions raising their petals like skirts to the sky, bearing their marooned gashes wounds kamakaze missions welcoming poison-tipped swords, then, falling shy in the moment of golden turning the pain egresses, resurrection is ardently invested in the duality under blankets blowing all their swollen pages like layered petticoats saged with the cream of inverted wisdom kissing hems of sacred mothers from the interior a vision scryed in a ponderous mirror like ensconced Delphi waving words mystic witch the most valuable thing undressed, whose onyx thoughts turn exotic ermine tongue velvet tipped to thumb the dexterous man-eating succulent fruit all the corsetted strings come undone chords planchette, automatic, sprouting a new view underneath the fissures buried deep in the soil of it all, evolution like a personal revolution grew dear dark shadows best left undressed and Donne raw when the tears hit the falling brown spaces spooning in between the simplicity of a fresh reign the dazzling shoots expel soft bullets unfurling eyes schizophrenic sewn needles in haystacks found in prim rows prose roses Nin arrives climaxing the Narnia stories to climb anonymity's tower notoriously held like a slick sword psalmed and reloaded character climbs the warrior pole clinging to cells like seductive ivy borne again green Eve eyed naive cruxed unmercifully to bloom blushing fresh and pink open on display swords like scissor-tongues cut and graze, unnecessarily speaking whisper the Lilith in, blunt and non-refined until they hit the sun what’s unkempt inside burns slowly and in the middle of it all a splash of colour the shade of carnage calls in sweet crimson peaks all her versions of read, finger-licked fertile pages provocative of a new season turning bursting through the blue azure veined purple royal, missing, dressed in camouflage, the unseen heart (LadyLabyrinth / 2022) "Rome is not outside me, but inside me. Her feverish sweetness, her tragic countryside, her own beauty and harmony, all these are mine, for my thought and my work" Modigliani

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Date: 9/4/2022 3:20:00 AM
I want to share my thoughts. Everything you see is created. For example look at anything in your house. The refrigerator, someone designed, got the materials and built and used electricity that was created and brought in. Your telephone was designed. Your car, your house, your computer had a designer. It takes intelligence to design it doesn't just happen. Nothing just happens. Everything is controlled and follows laws for example gravity, and light, etc. Everything was created by an intelligent
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Date: 9/5/2022 4:17:00 AM
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/communion_1007994
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 9/5/2022 4:16:00 AM
Hi Michael. It is quite amazing when someone goes into great depth with their comments on any of my poems. It is even more outstanding when someone has the courage to voice their beliefs, particularly in God. We all have our own relationship with God/ Source. We all have our internal conversations with something 'other', some refer to it as a 'soul'. I believe we are plugged directly into God. Now whether God is 'Jesus', many will debate, and I am not certain. But as I mention below, I do believe in the supernatural and if I believe in the supernatural then I most certainly believe in God and the antithesis of God. If there is Light there is Dark. My thoughts on God - in the link I supply here to you.
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 9/5/2022 3:58:00 AM
As for design, I do agree, we are all connected as part of a great design. Some even believe there is a divine message in our genetic code and this I believe to be true. Perhaps some of us have been designed to write as a means for something to channel through us to pass on messages, lessons, reasons. Those with a firm belief in something greater than ourselves, and the inter-connectedness in all of us, will intuitively understand why we are here and for what purpose. My thoughts are out there in the ether for all to see or not, to understand or receive something from the internal conversations I have...there is no need for a profound biblical conversion placed over me, my belief in God/Source is strong and I continually have conversations with Jesus...as some do with Buddha, and other masters. I do believe our life is reviewed, when that time comes...none of us are saints. :)
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Michael Tor
Date: 9/4/2022 4:35:00 AM
Thank you for listening and Your soul is precious because The bible says our lives are like a vapor before you know it we leave this earth. As you get older the time just flys by. Before you know it we are sadly on our death beds. We all die. There is a purpose for your life. We are all asked what did you do for others while on earth , what good deeds? There will be a record of your whole life and it will be shown to you. God will show you someday how I reached out to you. Nothing happens by chance God put it in my heart to share this with you this morning. He has planted a seed, and he is knocking at the door of your heart, please let him in. Thank you for listening and I will keep you in my prayers.
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Michael Tor
Date: 9/4/2022 4:26:00 AM
The most important part that I want to share is that jesus loves you more than anything you can imagine. His love is the same for you it doesn't change. We can not earn our way to heaven we are not good enough. God loved you so much that he had his son tortured and killed so you can get into heaven by just asking Jesus into your heart, repenting of your sins, and reading The King James version of the Bible and learning what he wants you to be like in order to please him and be blessed. You are a very intelligent young lady. I admire the research you do for your Poetry. You have a passion and you are meticulous in probably everything you do. It shows and it is a great quality everyone should have. I am a nerd and have spent thirty or more years doing what you do but only with The truth in the world that they hide from you. I question everything in life, and have learned a great deal. I hope it doesn't sound like I am bragging, I apologize if it does, I am being honest.
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Michael Tor
Date: 9/4/2022 3:56:00 AM
What I have researched is that there is only One God. How do I know this. Well The Bible says so. So why is the Bible correct in saying that Jesus was born as a human but was the son of God and was God. Because he was. Because it was proven through history that he healed the blind, it was proven that he cured the Lepers, because iit is a fact that he brought Lazarus back to life, and it is a fact that he died for your sins so you would not have to face eternal hell he paid that price for you. In the old testament it was predicted that Jesus would be born from a virgin and he would give up his life for us and rise again from being dead, and he did. The New Testament proves and confirms this through Historic records. So if I was a betting man I would choose him as my God. More importantly because he Loves you more than anything.
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Michael Tor
Date: 9/4/2022 3:46:00 AM
So then when you determine that a God has done the creation because space doesnt create, and time doesnt create, and big explosions do not create they just blow things up. A conscious Intelligent being of super, super super intelligence can only design and create. Big Bang theory does not create, common sense tells you that. Air, time, and explosion, gives you air, time, and explosion, nothing else. So now we have to decide which God did all the creation.
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Michael Tor
Date: 9/4/2022 3:40:00 AM
What keeps a person's blood pressure from skyrocketing. Who designed your brain? The millions of neurons that work through chemical electricity. Who designed feelings in your body, your hand, your skin. When you lift your hand up do you have any idea what happened or were you designed to be able to do it and you do not know how it is done because only a God not your Dr, not a Scientist, no human being can ever create and control and design the trillions of cells in your body that duplicate and know where to go and develop. for example your kidneys, your heart, your eyes, they are designed by a creator to go where they are supposed to. Only a God can do that.
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Michael Tor
Date: 9/4/2022 3:32:00 AM
being. You have trillions of cells in your body each of them has your dna strand that has millions of pieces of information. Your cells are programmed to stop growing after a designed time. If they weren't you would continue growing. Who designed those cells to do that? Your eyes have hundreds of different functions. Who designed all the functionsof your eyes? Your kidneys filter the blood who designed the kidneys to do that? You have emotions you feel love, you feel angry, how is emotion created and felt? How do you feel an emotion? When it rains why doesn't a lake come down at once, why are there raindrops and who breaks the water up into droplets? Who designed your heart? To pump perfectly at a certain systolic and diastolic pressure any more and you have high blood pressure and possibly have a stroke. What regulates a healthy persons blood pressure?
Date: 5/2/2022 7:19:00 AM
My friend, the protective circle, is always a ring of light and a positive blessing in life. One may receive that divine protection by embracing the Light and the Son, imho.. We live in a very dark and evil world. We swim in shark infested waters and sometimes extra poison is added to that ocean. Karma is real, the more good that we do-the more good we receive. The heart's truth feeds the soul.. A fav...God bless.
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Date: 4/25/2022 5:48:00 AM
Life After Life.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/25/2022 5:49:00 AM
https://movies2watch.is/tv/watch-life-after-life-hd-79384
Date: 4/24/2022 10:11:00 AM
then we shall meet again
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/24/2022 6:09:00 PM
lol, it is more than a given, I have met and lived with a few characters in this soupy joint....in a previous life. And I have been sent to this raven-filled purgatory for my sins...and contrition/s. The rocks in the pockets were mud.
Date: 4/23/2022 8:01:00 PM
my own thought is much simpler, and that is we are life and, in a form, where life can look at itself...though the form we are in dies, life does not die, and from this point of view we are eternal...the essence of what we were moves on...I have known many lives, many deaths, some I have met along the way more than once...there is joy and great sadness in this, for I never belong to any time or place, which leaves a loneliness that can never be filled fully, yet there is great joy in living
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/23/2022 9:03:00 PM
My thoughts/beliefs align closely with that concept, which is close to reincarnation.
Date: 4/23/2022 1:07:00 PM
maybe when the heart stops there is nothing and all the anguish, we have placed upon ourselves is for not, some live life for their perceptions beyond life, others live life and conquer each struggle as it comes, believing this is what is...the philosopher said "I think therefore I am" not "I have faith, therefore, there is more" and more may be a nightmare
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/23/2022 1:28:00 PM
each to his own ponderance good bard. Nothing about where we go after death has been scientifically proved, no one has the exact answer. Everyone has their own personal beliefs. We all live and conquer our own struggles in our own way, which does not mean any of us are better than, or less than another; for some, the great escape route, disassociation through creativity. Some immerse themselves and never come out again. All comes from the heart (what one feels, "love" ) which scientifically is inextricably in league with the brain. When the heart stops, the brain stops. I believe there is a transference to another 'dimension' at that point, and if I believe in the supernatural, which has occurred in my life on quite a few very peculiar occasions, then I certainly believe in another life after death. When we pass (some will bluntly say 'die'), perhaps we go where we believe we go. Some people have pure 'faith' that we just 'end' and that is it. I do not believe that at all.
Date: 4/23/2022 6:38:00 AM
methinks time is not real, rather the perception of time once created is real...the distance between a bud and a bloom is not measured in time, it's measured in a forward motion like the movement of a tide that's born in the sea rushes to the shore dies beneath the sands...then again, I just killed a minute with this response...my poetic friend
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/23/2022 9:21:00 AM
time is addictive, one always wants more...when the heart stops, we just enter the next dream where time has another measure.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/23/2022 9:21:00 AM
“We believe that we can change the things around us in accordance with our desires—we believe it because otherwise we can see no favourable outcome. We do not think of the outcome which generally comes to pass and is also favourable: we do not succeed in changing things in accordance with our desires, but gradually our desires change. The situation that we hoped to change because it was intolerable becomes unimportant to us. We have failed to surmount the obstacle, as we were absolutely determined to do, but life has taken us round it, led us beyond it, and then if we turn round to gaze into the distance of the past, we can barely see it, so imperceptible has it become.” Marcel Proust, In Search of Lost Time
Date: 4/22/2022 8:15:00 PM
"You can reflect on your life - Time isn't real - How much time can you kill?"
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Date: 4/22/2022 9:28:00 PM
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/faute_de_mieux_1427767
Date: 4/22/2022 8:13:00 PM
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/split_schizoid_mission_1447461
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