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Hear With Out U

walking home alone thinking back to the dayz when u used to walk me home wishing it could be like that again wondering wat did i do wrong that u had to leave like this idk but i remember ur the one who said i loved u first now im wondering if u still do i now ill give the world 4 u even after the pain u cased me im still wayting and wishing u can hold me in ur arms like u used to do u no wats weard i thought u were my hole life we were best freinds also lovers but now all i got is a broken heart ur not even hear to heal it like u said u always said u would never be the one to hurt me or even let anyone hurt me now im crying hurting more than ever wishing u were hear healing my pain but i quess thats not going to happen it dosent matter how much i pray-gigglez

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Date: 12/26/2023 6:11:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 5/4/2016 11:39:00 AM
deep write, Connie, I'm just here visiting your poem once again. If you ever return to post, I'd like to come back to read your newest. Happy Days **SKAT**
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Date: 4/16/2016 3:07:00 PM
connie carrasco, Nice to read your poem today. enjoyed ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/27/2016 8:16:00 PM
CONNIE, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/18/2016 1:39:00 PM
hope to see you back again. SKAT
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Date: 9/9/2015 9:06:00 AM
Connie, enjoyed reading your verse today. SKAT
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Date: 9/4/2009 11:33:00 AM
I am so happy to be reading your excellent poetry today Connie. I thank you for sharing it here at the Soup. Love, Carol
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