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Hear Me Cry

Before I die Hear me cry Sometimes it seems He knows my needs At times it feels Like this is real Most times at night He's out of sight During the day The same way With each new lie I die inside

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Katherine Stella

Date: 9/19/2010 9:28:00 AM

congrats lena on this being featured this week such sad imagery and I know just how this feels me still feeling the sting everytime his name is mention keep up the great writing enjoyed

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/18/2010 5:27:00 PM

Hello, Lena here I am stopping by to say hi and CONGRATULATIONS! What a delightful poem. Had fun reading your featured poem of the week. Take care,.. p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/13/2010 12:37:00 PM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week here at PoetrySoup Lena. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/12/2010 3:58:00 PM

Congrats Lolita on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a nice one to share with us all... hope u are doing well..with luv..

Ivan Beresford

Date: 2/16/2009 5:44:00 AM

Hi, I decided to check out all your poems and this one really touched my heart. Like most people I know what it's like to go through what you have written about here and it makes me sad that other people have gone through the same thing, I hope you never have to feel this way again. By the way, why "Lolita"?.