Hear Me

Pain is inevitable. I can't tell whether you will let go of me Or you will let me hear the words I always wanted. Sometimes I tend to figure out the real us Whether if it's true or not; Whether it's the reality or just a mere dream. I don't want to cause anymore pain to myself- And neither to you. This maybe painful- But please hear me out. I love you- But I love myself more; That's why I'm letting you go.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/10/2016 7:48:00 AM

- I enjoy reading your first poem, you write great Kat Anne :) - Warm welcome to Poetry - Soup :) - hugs // Sun :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/2/2016 11:35:00 PM

Kat Anne,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 7/2/2016 8:23:00 AM

Kat, wow....this is a serious write....I have a feeling you are an accomplished poet.... I'm giving this poem a perfect 7. Skat

Kat Anne
Date: 7/3/2016 12:28:00 AM

Actually, I'm just an amateur poet but thank you so much :)

David Smith

Date: 7/2/2016 6:51:00 AM

Brave poem that seems to be a confirmation of where you are at with your feelings which is about about putting yourself first even if it pains others. Good that you end on positive note. Like poem as whole. The first line a simple statement works well. Draws one in to see what you have to say. Well done. My wife is from the Philippines. We have been married 27 years. God Bless David from NZ

Kat Anne
Date: 7/2/2016 7:16:00 AM

Thank you so much for your positive comment. You're the first person who commented one of my works and I really appreciate it. It inspires me to write more poem. God bless you and your wife :) Hope you can visit Philippines soon.