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Healing Sun

For the first time I allow the sun to blaze into my eyes To heal my injured cornea I allow the tender wind To dry my watery eye I await the sun to come back From every building we passed For the first time I adore the shining surface I willingly gave it a glance of beauty It lusted upon my face giving it a blow of life It came upon my dark life and gave it a glow Gave it a hope, gave it the feeling of freedom The position of power And For the first time Before the arrive of dusk I adored the sun…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/6/2010 11:32:00 PM
Wow Louzana, what a deeply moving poem, how wonderful to appreciate the sun in a whole new light... btw there's an extra "n" in shining-- hope this helps-- thank you for sharing this inspiring poem...nikko :)
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Date: 9/6/2010 11:59:00 AM
What a nice and deep outcome 4 U. When it comes to tears, mine are all dry. Not out of a new shining life. I think I got tired of life not making sense. One day I plan to enjoy the rising of the sun. For right now I will wait in the dusk with no position of power. Enjoyed your poem*luv~SKAT
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