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Healing Flesh

Do not see me as I am Or you'll be disappointed See instead my wall of flesh Dismembered and disjointed I'll make sure the bones will mend And never show their age Rest inside my warmest thoughts Of quiet tempered rage Discover endless reasons why The flesh will always fail Embodiments of truer cause Could look behind the veil

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Winter Wallace

Date: 10/28/2009 7:07:00 PM

Congratulations on the feature, great poem

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/28/2009 4:52:00 PM

Good one! Congrad's Yoni ! Light & Love

Eric Siedzikowski

Date: 10/28/2009 3:37:00 PM

Stimulating piece of literary art that is sublime in form with a sentencing structure that is polished bright beyond the effulgence of any gem known to man.Sincerely,Eric

Donna Golden

Date: 10/28/2009 1:14:00 PM

Masterfully written quatrain, Yoni. The second stanza is my favorite, although each one shows depth and introspection that is admirable. Hugs, Donna

Andrew Besag

Date: 10/28/2009 1:04:00 PM

I really like the flow of your words in this poem.

Sue Mason

Date: 10/28/2009 9:00:00 AM

I love these philosophies which say we are not our body ... they've never had arthritis ... LOL ... wonderful write here Yoni and how nice to have it a feature this week at the Soup! Congratulations!!

Daver Austin

Date: 10/28/2009 8:25:00 AM

Congrats on this selection. All appearance is deception and we as a society love it. Love, daver

Andrew Crisci

Date: 10/28/2009 8:05:00 AM

Hi, Yoni! Congratulations on your featured poem this week. This is a beautiful Quatrain filled with honesty and truth! Keep on writing, smile...you have got talent! I wish you continued success. Warmest regards, Andrew.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/28/2009 1:08:00 AM

Hi Yoni Congratulations,a well deserved feature..excellent..Yoni,hope sunshine smiles reach your heart today..Charma

James Fraser

Date: 10/26/2009 5:18:00 AM

Many, many congratulations on your poetry being featured on this October week Yoni >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/26/2009 4:30:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Yoni. May you have many more features. Love, Carol

Date: 10/25/2009 6:33:00 PM

Interesting perspective for the reader to think about. The emotion comes through your words. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen

Michael Jordan

Date: 12/31/2008 10:07:00 AM

Excellent poetry - wow - wonderfully penned - excellent Rhyme and Flow - God Bless, MJ

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 12/31/2008 10:05:00 AM

Marvelous cadence and rhyme... once again, your words and imagery transcend the ordinary. Well done Yoni! Best wishes, Keith