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This is about having a mental breakdown and Having an assessment and what happened.
In a room with no carpet just a stone floor. Bars on the windows and a lock on the door. The door swings open and there thay stand. Looking straight at you note book in hand. They ask you questions to learn how you tick. To search you mind to know why you are sick. Thay talk to you softly so nice and so kind. But thus is to calm you and to search thought Your mind. But when they have finished and the talks at an end They fill you with pills in the hope you will mend. .

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Date: 10/25/2023 3:29:00 PM
an informative write, Paul. I empathize with anyone who has what's called a 'mental breakdown.' The bareness of the place, the matter-of-factness seems distant and unempathetic. Thanks for sharing...have a pleasant evening, Sara
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