Heal

heal on hill mountain step upward carefully to feel own life never look back go ahead on keep stamina strong maintain balance in every spheres reach the top stand a while come back to ground smile Written on: 17th July 2016

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Lynn Marie

Date: 8/8/2016 3:40:00 PM

A delightful inspiring piece brimming with wisdom. Love the title, the shape, the feel of your words - love your writing! blessings, lynn

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/10/2016 12:13:00 AM

Thanks for your appreciation and blessings my friend. Sorry for late repply. i am in official tour now. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/25/2016 6:23:00 PM

very nice one. And I enjoyed its message

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/25/2016 9:19:00 PM

Thanks for your appreciation my friend. Hugs, bl

Len Gasun

Date: 7/20/2016 9:57:00 AM

Great poem with great food for thought my dear friend, BL! Great job my dear friend. Thanks for sharing and best wishes! love and hug, Leonora

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/20/2016 11:17:00 AM

Thanks my lovely smiling friend for your high appreciation. Loved always, bl

Constance La France

Date: 7/16/2016 6:06:00 PM

BL, love the lesson in this verse, well done, 7 ~

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/16/2016 6:08:00 PM

Thanks my lovely smiling friend for your comment with beautiful appreciation and 7. Loved always, bl