Headstrong

Passions unrestrained by common sense- wander unaccustomed pathways

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P Sheart

Date: 8/14/2008 8:53:00 AM

Hello Brian So very true. One never knows what one will meet upon those paths but still, common sense can save us from ourselves. Very thought provoking write! Enjoyed much. Love Light Truth Patricia

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/14/2008 8:37:00 AM

How true....it can lead to trouble! ...Interesting poem!! .....Carrie

Sharon Winter

Date: 8/14/2008 6:34:00 AM

Dangerous pathways I would agree. Nicely written. Love, Shar

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 8/14/2008 3:07:00 AM

Yikes, those pathways should be well left alone, for they only ever lead to sadness. A beautiful read, love Kristin

Michael Jordan

Date: 8/14/2008 2:50:00 AM

Boy that sure is a mouthful to just be a few words - God Bless Brian