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Headlong Through a Minefield

My heart is seized in terror as you flutter through my mind running headlong through a minefield to its dangers you seem blind. I've lost my mother, father, brother, will I also lose my child? How can life be so cruel, why must life be such a trial? My prayers are always answered, but the answer's always "no," my sanity is fragile, I can't take another blow, Until you are a parent, you will never know true fear. Can you take me, instead, Lord? 'Cause I'd gladly volunteer. ©Danielle White

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/6/2009 10:02:00 AM
Another desperate plea from a mother's love. Blessings and my best wishes and prayers, Danielle.
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Date: 2/6/2009 7:52:00 AM
This truly shows the unconditional love a parent has for their child, the always worrying and willingness to hurt before them. The rhyme is perfect and the message within this is so strong and clear. Many blessings to you. Michael
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