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Heading For the Hospice For Crystal

She’ll be leaving soon I see The ambulance has arrived, Waiting for another guest To take a long, hard ride. A malicious, microscopic serpent Invaded blood and bones Leaving this sweet young lady Ravaged, scared and ominously alone. Looking out her window now At the roses she planted and pruned Hospice is her final stop Before sailing past the moon. She takes one final, languid look At her weeping bedroom walls Before they load her listless life She does her best to stall Those made to come and carry her From her house of torment and tears She bows her head and genuflects Fighting back the fear. Knowing the end’s inevitable Yet staving off all she can Smelling the roses wafting scent Of a magnificently more preeminent plan. Postscript: The young lady left this world today Floating far beyond sky blue; Now nothing more to do or say Except God bless, “Adieu.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 8/2/2022 5:50:00 PM
This poem hurts, sweetly, rightly and sadly so. Never, our children should go before us, a part of life I don't like at all. Your words are poignant and make me think of "The First Snowfall" by James Russel Lowell. Grief needs to be shared. Thanks, Terry
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Terrell Martin
Date: 8/2/2022 7:20:00 PM
Thanks Steven, I guess I need to read Lowell's "The First Snowfall." Thanks for the comment and the tip. R/Terry
Date: 8/2/2022 3:14:00 PM
Powerful and soulful poem, Terrell. Nice imagery my friend, and the postscript was great. Blessings, Bill
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Terrell Martin
Date: 8/2/2022 3:30:00 PM
Hello again, Bill. As always, thanks for reading and posting your always deeply thoughtful compliments. I'm glad you approve, and I still owe you a visit - coming soon, I promise. Write on, Terry
Date: 8/2/2022 2:30:00 PM
Dear Terry, is it true? Is this a neighbor? The power of your rhythmic words leave images of a mournful lady who has watched her life pass before her....oh, how tragic but so beautifully written. :)Paulette
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Date: 8/2/2022 3:26:00 PM
Hello again Paulette, my poetic friend. Yes - a true story of a close and dear friend of one of my daughters. She's been going steadily downhill with diabetes and sadly, in recent days had given up the fight. She passed this morning in a local hospital, apparently, all alone when she passed. My daughter is with her family and close friends right now. Thanks for asking and so sorry for the sadness. God bless you & yours, Terry

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