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Heading For a New Home

"Everybody deserves a change in life and hope for a better one....even a pebble" Heading for a new home now I am sinking down and down, touching the aquatic plants around got to reach the bottom somehow. I am sinking down and down after creating a ripple in water, got to reach the bottom somehow hope this life will be far better. After creating a ripple in water a life without any ripple till date, hope this life will be far better past was something want to forget. A life without any ripple till date under the scorching heat of sun, past was something want to forget until you picked me just for fun. Under the scorching heat of sun a new life was a dream for me, until you picked me just for fun I am into the deep blue sea. A new life was a dream for me, touching the aquatic plants around I am into the deep blue sea heading for a new home now. ========================== Placement: 6th;(August 2011) By:kashinath karmakar Contest:A Poem,Please Sponsor:Constance La France

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Date: 9/3/2011 3:56:00 AM
A Sixth Place Win Congratulations. CR
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Date: 9/3/2011 2:02:00 AM
So entirely true Kashi. Love it. many warm congrats for this win.
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Date: 9/1/2011 10:56:00 AM
Congratulations, Kashinath. :)
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Date: 8/30/2011 8:00:00 PM
Congrats on your win!!!!!!!!!wonderful poem!!!!!!!!!!----Lori
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Date: 8/30/2011 5:20:00 PM
Your soup mail box is spilling over. Congrats on this winning piece....that pen you are writing with is s-m-o-k-i-n hot! Gwendolen
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Date: 8/30/2011 4:39:00 PM
Congrats Kash on your exciting win with more magnificent poetry luv.. great piece.. so enjoyed.. getting to s.m. shortly luv.. busy day..
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Date: 8/30/2011 3:06:00 PM
A lovely write Kash, congratulations to you on your win!! Love this ;)
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Date: 8/30/2011 1:46:00 PM
yehey, my kashi girlie!!!j/kidding!.. congrats on a well deserved glowing award! grrreat stuff... : ) huggs
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Date: 8/30/2011 12:59:00 PM
Good one for Constance's contest..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading your words this afternoon..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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Date: 8/30/2011 12:16:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Kash. Excellent write. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 8/30/2011 11:13:00 AM
hey Kash congrats on another great win.. David
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Date: 8/30/2011 10:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Constance's "A Poem, Please" contest Kashinath. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/30/2011 8:51:00 AM
So much emotion flowing in the poetry I am reading this morning of both seasoned poets and new poets. I am happy I was able to read your poetry today Kashinath. Have a wonderful day and I will be back soon to read more of your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/30/2011 4:51:00 AM
sentimental without being overloaded with emotions... a most fine write, wow, kashi.. winning's best!!..come visit! :)
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Date: 8/29/2011 10:16:00 PM
this is really nice, Kashanath. Wonderful message and pretty flow. I think Constance should really like it! As usual, you are doing well with Pantoum poetry. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 8/29/2011 9:28:00 PM
oooohhh... very nice! I love this form and find it so difficult to write one that flows. you pulled it off, kash.. sweet! Happy eve~N
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