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I'm heading back to the basics tonight yes, I'm heading back to the starting line I swear I'm going to do it right this time no more stressing or letting negative energy creep into my life yes, I'm heading back to the starting line I will push aside the wreckage of my past and ask my Father above to guide no more stressing or letting negative energy creep into my life I'm going to take a lot more time for my family and live a grateful life I will push aside the wreckage of my past and ask my Father above to guide I swear I'm going to do it right this time I'm going to take a lot more time for my family and live a grateful life I'm heading back to the basics tonight 3/24/2018 ____________________ Contest

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Date: 3/21/2011 10:25:00 AM
A heartfelt congratulations to you ^Rick for your win in Paula's contest "Back To Back". Love, Carol
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Date: 3/21/2011 8:02:00 AM
A wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Congratulations on your win. Caryl
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Date: 3/20/2011 12:54:00 PM
Beautiful Pantoum!Congrats ^Rick on your win!--kashinath
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Date: 3/19/2011 12:59:00 AM
Love this theme, Rick, oh how we all would love a second chance, this is a wonderful philosophical poem, congrats being in the winners circle. Harry
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Date: 3/18/2011 8:23:00 PM
Many warm congrats for this win dear Rick.
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Date: 3/18/2011 3:48:00 PM
Congrats Rick on your wonderful win in Paula's Pantoum contest my friend.. a vibrant write .. enjoy with luv...
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Date: 3/18/2011 11:28:00 AM
An awesome job my manRick, great to see you in the top ten.. Congratulations on your worthy tenth place victory. Enjoy! Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/16/2011 9:57:00 PM
Rick, this one is unsual because it is a mixture of long lines and short lines. however, the lines mesh together very well and you told your message in that magical pantoum style, and an inspiring message it is!
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