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He Who Was Fog

Through the hills he walks With fear of touching the sky Never wanting to fly again Escaping his way to die He runs faster than the wind And ducks throughout the mountains For to the canyon he does sound Spilling like a fountain The heat beats down On the illustrious cloud But for no scream His pain is loud He, now half gone Tackles the ocean He knows he has won Fading he will shun But alas it is time To go back to sea’s wet Now a rainbow he shines And gone into a sunset

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/2/2010 6:29:00 PM
A cool write Justin.. enjoyed your take on the fog ... a nice setting too..luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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Date: 3/2/2010 6:25:00 PM
A very imaginative and descriptive of this moisture we call fog. Well done.
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