Get Your Premium Membership

He Who

would you step in front of someone you did not know and take a blow just to send a message just to show that the world isn't covered in filth take a second to listen to what I am about to spill he who takes violence ignorant to silence is filled with confusion that's why when it comes to losing its not a choice he must show he's tough violence is a tool that the fool will use to play he says it feels good but truthfully he can't say he who takes peace easy to please with a mind set at ease more than likely to sit back in a daze think of ways he can put a smile up on that face he who takes violence picks out fault and error he who takes peace only wants thing fairer they who take violence lurk among us we who take peace must help them become us.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/20/2016 12:11:00 AM
kyle murphy, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Login to Reply
Date: 4/17/2016 9:06:00 PM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Kyle. :)
Login to Reply
Date: 4/12/2016 1:45:00 PM
Dear KL, Nice first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Wish u a successful journey ahead........hugs
Login to Reply
Murphy Avatar
Kyle Murphy
Date: 4/17/2016 9:01:00 PM
Thank you (:
Date: 4/12/2016 10:34:00 AM
Kyle, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Login to Reply
Murphy Avatar
Kyle Murphy
Date: 4/17/2016 9:02:00 PM
Thank you (:

Book: Reflection on the Important Things