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Sat in his chair, the tv still on He’s not changed the channel for so very long The message on screen says a shut down’s ensuing But press any button to carry on viewing The remote, untouched on the arm of the chair The TV shuts down like there’s nobody there Old Albert is sat with his chin on his chest The room is still cold but at last he’s at rest Time was when milk would build up by the door But nobody delivers milk any more Mail might protrude from the mailbox at night But no bills are due and so no-one will write And as time goes by no-one wonders why Nothing’s been seen of that old army guy Everyone knows that everyone dies But no-one does nothing… until there are flies It falls to a man in a blue paper suit And a copper equipped with a size ten boot To let themselves in and survey the scene Of a house full of flies but otherwise clean Albert, to no-one’s surprise is sat there It’s patently clear that he’s beyond a care A man at the door says if it’s up to you And this house is vacant put me in the queue The cop shuts the door in the intruder’s face And mutters, ‘society, no sense of place’ How does a man die completely alone How can a man be completely unknown Upstairs the blue suited man finds the bed A jacket with medals laid out and he said Not really the job of a pathologist But I think he wants to be buried in this The note that is still held in one withered hand Unfolded and read just as Albert had planned I’m sorry it said that I’ve tarnished your day And you were the one who would find me this way Please be so kind as to think well of me And know I was not always this that you see I fought when the world faced a new tyranny I fought for our freedom and our liberty I fought for my king but from what I can see I fought for a land that would not fight for me I’m happy to go now for I’ve been bereft That, of all my comrades, there’s only me left I go to my God, I won’t fret and won’t cry And I’ll meet my soldier friends up in the sky ** Word was sent out in the national media Searches on Google and on Wikipedia But no wartime comrade was anywhere found To stand and salute or to fire a round But the manager of an East End snooker hall Seeing the news, gave his father a call ** Six pallbearers, great grandsons of men Who Albert had saved with a half empty sten Those men who, once safe, watched him go in for more And who watched him fall, shot, to the shell strewn floor Those wounded who’d watched as he crawled his way back Dragging a man by his rifle strap The pallbearer’s fathers and their fathers too There for a hero that none of them knew There to salute without further ado A stranger whose name each one of them knew Seven the number of uniformed men Who step up to each fire three shots and then The last post plays out over old Albert’s grave Where a stone would soon stand saying… ‘He was the brave’ Written 8 November 2021 Entered in: War Contest Sponsor: Kai Michael Neumann

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Date: 12/25/2021 8:51:00 AM
Congratulations on top honors, Terry. So very well done! ...Fran
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Terry Flood
Date: 12/25/2021 11:32:00 AM
Thank you, Francis. Glad you enjoyed. Terry
Date: 12/23/2021 1:33:00 PM
Back with congratulations Terry, and so well deserved, not only old Albert, but all war heroes especially the forgotten are now immortalised in your poem, cheers David
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David Kavanagh
Date: 12/24/2021 12:21:00 PM
Yeah try a blank verse, Ha Ha Ha! Boom! Boom!
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Terry Flood
Date: 12/23/2021 3:18:00 PM
Thanks David. Strange thing, the human mind… I wrote this not so long ago and yet today I’m struggling to come up with an idea I can finish. Fortunately, I know that can change in an instant, so here’s hoping. Thanks for your congrats. Terry
Date: 12/22/2021 6:44:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this---and yes, for bravely exposing a 'heroic reality' in your awesome poetic way. God bless you.
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Date: 12/23/2021 3:14:00 PM
Thank you Beata. In 2021 this reality should be beyond belief, alas it is all too real. So glad you ‘enjoyed’. Terry
Date: 12/22/2021 1:19:00 PM
An amazing story/write, so sad and so true. Your pen was working overtime on this wonderful write. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................
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Date: 12/22/2021 2:24:00 PM
Thank you Paula. This was one of those poems that just flowed in one straight write. From memory, I didn’t even have to edit it (aside from spelling mistakes/typos). Sometimes it just goes like that. Terry
Date: 12/22/2021 11:52:00 AM
It's a beautiful poem, with heartbreak and honor of equal measure-- I know our society only pays lip service to its defenders, but God never forgets, and neither have you, it seems, Terrry...congrats on a well deserved 1st place win!
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Date: 12/22/2021 10:02:00 AM
Simply beautiful. A poignant ode to all who die alone~but especially the Brave.
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Date: 12/22/2021 10:40:00 AM
Thank you Ann. So glad you enjoyed. Terry
Date: 12/22/2021 8:40:00 AM
"Everyone knows that everyone dies But no-one does nothing… until there are flies", "How does a man die completely alone How can a man be completely unknown", - The whole poem is very beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/22/2021 10:44:00 AM
Thank you, Christuraj. I worried briefly about the deliberate bad gramma of ‘no-one does nothing’ but I wanted to reflect an anger/anguish that ‘no-one did anything’ simply didn’t portray. I’m glad you enjoyed. Terry
Date: 12/22/2021 5:46:00 AM
You have graced us with a brilliant, powerful and creative write! I am so impressed and inspired by your insights! Beautiful words for any reader! I love this. Definitely a fave! God bless you and Congrats on your first place win - so much deserved!
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Date: 12/22/2021 7:13:00 AM
Thankyou Regina. Like many an artist or writer, some folk only get the recognition they deserve when it’s seemingly too late. Thank you so much for the fave, very much appreciated. Terry
Date: 12/22/2021 5:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your first placement Terry
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Date: 12/22/2021 7:06:00 AM
Thankyou Paghunda. I’ve had a soft spot for this poem since I wrote it, so I’m delighted with my win. Terry
Date: 11/9/2021 1:45:00 PM
Simply masterful, Terry. Bravo. All hail the Brave! ~ Gershon
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Terry Flood
Date: 11/9/2021 2:17:00 PM
Thanks, Gershon. It makes my blood boil when kids spout off about the elderly ruining their world when, whilst my ‘Albert’ is fictional, people like him are all too real. Glad you enjoyed. Terry
Date: 11/9/2021 10:33:00 AM
Fav'd! You must have read my daughter's mind! Aloha!
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Date: 11/9/2021 10:48:00 AM
Thanks for the fave, Rico. I’m intrigued as to what was in your daughter’s mind though. Terry
Date: 11/8/2021 5:44:00 PM
So sad, but what a tribute to serviceman everywhere. Unfortunately some people die all alone, no family or friends that care, a lonely soul sat there in a chair. Not in this case, those strangers did a wonderful thing giving a hero the end he deserved. Awesome poetry Terry! ~ Belle
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Date: 11/9/2021 11:13:00 AM
Hard to believe that this still happens, Belle, but it does. I liked the notion that Alberts pallbearers were all men who would never had been born save for the stranger that they were carrying. So glad you ‘liked’ this. Terry
Date: 11/8/2021 4:12:00 PM
Brilliant write Terry, I read of a similar case like that and an appeal went out and the old soldier got the send off he deserved. Tom
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Terry Flood
Date: 11/8/2021 4:14:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed, Tom. Yes, I’ve heard of a couple myself. Terry
Date: 11/8/2021 3:28:00 PM
Mind blowing poetry and storytelling, life's reality ain't pretty Terry, the flies alone explain that, unfortunately this dying alone and not being found for weeks or months still happens occasionally, it's no way for a soldier or anyone to die, but you do Albert justice here, and bury him with the respect he deserves, brilliant poem, and I hope it gets the recognition it deserves too, cheers David
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Date: 11/9/2021 11:08:00 AM
Oops… reading your gracious comment again I realised I’d spelt Flies wrong (strangely, a few lines down I spelt it right). All edited now… so thanks for the prompt. If it was a prompt, it was remarkably tactful. Terry
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Date: 11/8/2021 3:48:00 PM
Thankyou David. There’s only so many of my own poems that choke me up. This is now one of those few, probably, as you pointed out… because it still happens. I was planning to post this on armistice day but didn’t want to hold it back in case I decided to mess with it. So glad you felt it, David. Terry

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