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He Vs Me

I’m just a coffee-eyed princess that loves the attention, The kind you never get from good deeds. I just love the electric-touch of his bloody fingertips, Stained with the effects of sadomasochism. And it is still not my crimson lust that floods his mouth, It is not my frail shell of a girl that he holds in his arms. Because to him I’m just another pretty face, a stranger amongst the crowd, I do not tip-toe through the folds of his brain at midnight, And I do not remind him of red roses when I am on my knees in front of him. Begging, pleading for him to notice my struggle, Hands perched in a position to catch the eyes of the elders, And maybe have them question the holy order itself. I could cut his masculine heart out and have a feast, And the girl he notices still wouldn’t be me. I’m sinking deeper into the flood, And even though I seem totally water-proof and calm in the storm, Even though I seem invincible, Really I’m just invisible.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/29/2016 11:03:00 AM
Corie, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/28/2016 9:52:00 PM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Corie. :)
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Date: 4/28/2016 11:37:00 AM
Corie,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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