He Shall Be First

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~He Shall Be First~ (Rhyme) We should put God in our life first, That's what He expect us to do the Bible says, From the birth of morn, till the setting sun again, We should worship Him and serve Him right each day When I awake and see the sun in the distance start to rise, I thank Him with all my heart,His wonderful creation never,ever ceases, God has made everything around you, that your eyes ever see, He created the Earth and man, and that means of course, you and me, So I've chosen to put God in my own life always first,no matter what, That was one of the wisest decision, a long time ago back then I've made, The Holy Bible tells us that God should always come first in everything, When we do this,He'll guide us all the way through,that's the promise He's made, God is in complete control of everything,included your own life,don't you see that my friend, God can do anything He wants anywhere, and His Kingdom has no beginning or end! Praise the Lord! Amen Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@20005 January,14,2015

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Chris Tian

Date: 1/16/2015 12:36:00 PM

That is a powerfully poetic testimony of the Lord's greatness. May Christ continue to pour out His Spirit upon you Dorian, that you should increase in faith, hope, and love; in Him.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 4/20/2015 2:16:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly,Chris,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Much appreciated,dear friend.I sinceryly apologize for replying late with this one:)Wishing you a very lovely day!In His light!God bless you!:)D.

Arlene Smith

Date: 1/16/2015 5:59:00 AM

A beautiful, poetic sermon dear friend... Hugs.. Arlene

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 4/20/2015 2:16:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly,Arlene,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Much appreciated,dear friend.I sinceryly apologize for replying late with this one:)Wishing you a very lovely day!In His light!God bless you!:)D.

Emile Pinet

Date: 1/14/2015 2:53:00 PM

This is a beautiful poem, laid out well and described with feeling, written from the heart of a caring soul.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 4/20/2015 2:15:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly,Emile,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Much appreciated,dear friend.Wishing you a very lovely day!In His light!God bless you!:)D.

Arlene Smith
Date: 1/16/2015 5:54:00 AM

Sorry, Emile... Don't know how I posted that on your comment.....

Arlene Smith
Date: 1/16/2015 5:47:00 AM

Poetry....