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He Says I Ask Him

I remember it well As I can tell He says I ask him to marry me But nay I say It was he that ask me We were crossing hiway 43 When we reach the middle he turned to and said but you didn't answer I replied I was afraid if I gave the wrong answer you just might wreck Then I would have to break your neck

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Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/30/2014 1:30:00 PM

:-). Congratulations on your win Patricia.

Patricia Bernard
Date: 10/1/2014 4:42:00 PM

Thanks Brenda for reading ......Tricia

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/28/2014 6:13:00 AM

- Patricia, congrats with your winning poem - Enjoy reading it - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Patricia Bernard
Date: 10/1/2014 4:43:00 PM

Thank you Anne for reading my true memory;-)....Tricia

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/28/2014 6:02:00 AM

I appreciate the humor in the write, Patricia. congrats on the win

Patricia Bernard
Date: 10/1/2014 4:45:00 PM

Thank you Dr. Ram I appreciate you taking the time to read it mean alot to me.....Tricia

Ma Yaseen

Date: 9/28/2014 4:29:00 AM

Congrats for your win patrica,,, Hugs

Patricia Bernard
Date: 9/28/2014 9:37:00 PM

Thank you for reading my true memory;)......Tricia

Judy Konos

Date: 9/27/2014 11:23:00 AM

Thank you for entering my contest!

Patricia Bernard
Date: 10/1/2014 4:48:00 PM

Thank you Judy for having this contest I enjoyed the "walk" down memory lane it has been 29 years sense I had the chance to do that......;-).....Tricia

Jan Allison

Date: 9/27/2014 8:46:00 AM

love the humour here Patricia many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 10/1/2014 4:53:00 PM

keep posting and I'll keep reading:-) hugs jan xxx

Patricia Bernard
Date: 10/1/2014 4:51:00 PM

Thanks Jan I am glad you took the time to read it does mean a lot to me it is people like you and Brenda, Dr. Ram and all the others that keep me doing this because it is hard to do but I love it and it helps my brain;-).....Tricia