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Written 7/19/23

They drug me through the village streets, And threw me at the Teacher's feet." "She's a sinner caught in the act." "She deserves death, that's a fact." All they saw was my sin, Not my repentant heart within. The Teacher wrote with his finger in the sand, Then looked up, made this demand: "Whoever has no sin cast the first stone." I trembled in fear, waiting my sin to atone. But one by one I heard the stones fall, And soon I was surrounded by no one at all. The Teacher looked at me with gentle eyes, "Does no one condemn you, neither do I." "Go and sin no more," he said, And all my fear and shame just fled. He looked at me and saw my heart, He saw the whole and not a part. He saw me, not just my sin. I was changed, ne'er the same again.

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Date: 8/2/2023 7:26:00 AM
Great poem Kim. I really enjoyed reading it. :)
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Kim Merryman
Date: 8/5/2023 7:26:00 PM
Thank you, Linda!
Date: 7/20/2023 12:51:00 PM
wow, that's a fantastic poem retelling a wonderful story of New Testament
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/20/2023 8:39:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 7/20/2023 7:40:00 AM
Kim, I wish I could write a poem based on a bible story half as good as this one. I'm sure Jesus and the accused woman have read it and approve of it as well. God bless, Terrell
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/20/2023 8:39:00 PM
Thank you, Terrell! What a sweet thing to say!
Date: 7/19/2023 7:59:00 PM
Well done, Kim! Hugs ~ Kim
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/20/2023 8:38:00 PM
Thank you, Kim!
Date: 7/19/2023 7:45:00 PM
Oh this is one of my favorite stories from The Bible. Love the way you bring out the basic lesson here. Love it. A fave for me. Bravo. God Bless, JB
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/20/2023 8:38:00 PM
Thank you, Judy! I'm honored you fav'd it.
Date: 7/19/2023 10:49:00 AM
A wonderful story/write/ending. Have a great/blessed day writing away..............
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/20/2023 8:37:00 PM
Thank you, Paula!
Date: 7/19/2023 10:47:00 AM
beautiful remembrance of the occasion and shame those that were around.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/20/2023 8:37:00 PM
Thank you, Eve!

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