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He Rides Alone This Life

He Rides Alone This Life He rode alone into this life abandoned in its infancy endured the slash of venom’s knife endured the pain that set him free from those who hid behind the robe while claiming they were free of sin and mocked the very truth they served while claiming to be godly men. Thus did he fight the demon’s lies in alleyways of nights, twice dark upon a steed that daily dies at sunrise melody of lark upon a branch enticing him to steel his heart and fight again the shadows that encase his heart the shadows he must not let win. So does he battle every day robed demons of that long past fray when overwhelmed he was betrayed a gentler spirit slow decayed. Defiantly he guides old hate protects the joy of infancy endures the slash of venom’s knife endures the pain that sets him free. Submited to Structured Forms – Iambic verse III Sponsor – Giorgio A.V. John G. Lawless 10/2/2014

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Date: 11/8/2014 5:33:00 AM
Interesting poem, congrats on the win, John
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John Lawless
Date: 11/8/2014 5:44:00 AM
Your comment is appreciated Dr. Mehta
Date: 11/7/2014 10:07:00 AM
Two outstanding lines, that sum this up...."Defiantly he guides old hate....protects the joy of infancy"...... Wow..... amazing and intense is this !! Well done, John!
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John Lawless
Date: 11/7/2014 6:12:00 PM
Thank you Carrie. There are some wounds that never heal and some offenses that defy forgiveness.
Date: 11/6/2014 8:09:00 PM
Wow a very powerful poem John. Your poem flowed with perfect rhythm. Congratulations on your win.
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John Lawless
Date: 11/7/2014 7:24:00 AM
Thank you Brenda, not a pleasant topic but a recurring one. Always appreciate your input and comments.
Date: 10/13/2014 10:05:00 AM
A very interesting and thoughtful piece. It flowed wonderfully, too.
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John Lawless
Date: 10/13/2014 4:16:00 PM
Thank you Carol.
Date: 10/4/2014 1:13:00 AM
A wonderful smooth read. Rhythmic indeed. You deal with some very dark situations, and devilish intentions. The outcome is moving in its read. I would also like to thank you for your comment on my "Flinders Poem", I have posted a reply. Feel free to request anymore details. Cheers mate, Scott
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John Lawless
Date: 10/13/2014 4:16:00 PM
thanks for reading and for you generous comment Scott

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