Get Your Premium Membership

He Quivers In Beats

I soak in his wheezed language drenching my breath ,as twilight rips the lining of my skin; a massive fire slowly rolling upon our chests… as the lion in him kneads a melodious rambling that the climbing heat, the serenade of minstrel’s tunes gushes on this day through a café’s view. Then once, twice, thrice with gentle stutter of outstretched whispers--- through the lure of a need humming---he could not speak clearly beyond the gardens. In a flash, like a hungry soul let loose, my steady mate quivers in beats as the singer drones ' The Way You Look Tonight.' “ Will you carry my name and be this guy's lifetime bride?” Secretly, the potion of my craving finally explodes! Sounds of The Day Contest For Nayda Ivette Negron Resubmitted 6/20/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/29/2014 11:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely poem Nette
Login to Reply
Date: 9/28/2014 6:54:00 AM
- Nette, congrats with your winning poem - A wonderful 1st place !!! - Enjoy reading it - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Date: 9/28/2014 5:32:00 AM
A spectacular write, nette, congrats on the win
Login to Reply
Date: 9/27/2014 11:24:00 AM
I love this... Thank you. Love and prayers, Gina
Login to Reply
Date: 9/27/2014 11:06:00 AM
Thank you for entering my contest!
Login to Reply
Date: 9/27/2014 10:43:00 AM
And back again wid huge congrats Nette on this top winning magnificent write !
Login to Reply
Date: 9/27/2014 9:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your number 1 win. This is one of my favorites.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/27/2014 8:18:00 AM
spectacular write Nette many congrats on your top spot:-) hugs jan xxx
Login to Reply
Date: 9/24/2014 11:53:00 AM
very beautifully penned excellent piece
Login to Reply
Date: 9/24/2014 12:06:00 AM
I-I um (gulp) Well I-uh---Whew! From: Slim-I-mean-Jim-I---Good stuff here Bette-I-mean-Let...
Login to Reply
Date: 9/23/2014 5:20:00 PM
Such a loving serenade... :o) Beautiful!
Login to Reply
Date: 9/23/2014 3:01:00 PM
Wow you had me on the edge of my seat. I thought he was never going to ask. What an excellent poem. This will do well.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/23/2014 2:46:00 PM
only one with immense passion can write this way..there are many who talk about passion many who dream about passion but passion is something from deep within that you either have or don't..and my poetic friend this poem is drenched in passion..I smile..good luck in the contest
Login to Reply
Date: 9/23/2014 2:46:00 PM
Gotta admit, we guys get scared popping the question. This tremendous poem speaks of real anticipation and joy of forthcoming lifetime commitment. A favorite from a genius.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/23/2014 2:38:00 PM
Simply spectacular nette...any girls dream...hugs Tim
Login to Reply
Date: 9/23/2014 1:21:00 PM
A proposal to that old minstrel tune, "The way you look tonight." Got a kick out of this one, nette. Love, daver
Login to Reply
Date: 9/23/2014 11:22:00 AM
Superb passionate write Nette! Sure will fly high! Best wishes!
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things