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He Proposes

An entire landscape, beautiful, indeed In the heart of countryside, and in the midst Of well-disguised forest, never published Overwhelming with joy, overthere we sip At a place, you may never believe Evergreen, fall flowing, romantic Beneath, it's extraordinary peace Whisperin', confess, together we kiss Finally there, we want to get married HE PROPOSES! Busaba Patanawiroj 3 June, 2011

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 6/6/2011 5:15:00 PM

This is full of the energy of a courtship! How beautiful THIS landscape...I especially like the usage of "never published." To me this line says, it hasn't been tarnished by the hands of men. So nice and pristine,,,,then the kiss! Gwendolen

Busaba Patanawiroj
Date: 6/7/2011 9:52:00 PM

Thanks Gwendolen, your kind words and encouragement are great for me to continue to improve better works.

Kyle Kriticos

Date: 6/6/2011 12:51:00 AM

Nice build up. An all-out enjoyable read, busaba! Thank you!

Busaba Patanawiroj
Date: 6/6/2011 5:38:00 AM

Thanks so much...I am just new here for 2 weeks, andso happy many people like my writes.....Kyle, your works are fantastic too!